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I highly recommend reading this novel and here's why:
It's writing quality is at a professional level and it makes the reading quite enjoyable. It's clear and non reiterative. This author's creativity is also off the charts!
It completely exceeded my expectations!
For anyone out there trying to find a good read, this is definitely worth the while.
(as a plus, you won't end with less neurons after reading it)
trash, there's not even a world background explanation the author just dictate there's a game everyone will need to play and that's that.
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The storyline is that bad but the GRAMMAR!!! It annoys me so much. I think you should probably try to fix your grammar, you’ll get more readers
I really really want to like this novel. It is well written and the characters aren't too bland even though they don't matter at all in the next arc.
But there are some key problems that make it impossible:
1. The second short story (simulated life) within this novel is a festival of cliques and not interesting at all.
2. Face slapping is a sport and while the MC doesn't always take the first opportunity to do it, it will always happen in the end.
3. There is no red line, no overarching goal for the MC to achieve.
4. The system by itself is reducing any stakes to almost nothing. I don't mean for the author to add something stupid like, immediate death or destruction of the soul, but there could at least be monetary losses or some kind of debuffs.
5. The author drags on and on about unimportant stuff, skipping chapters is sometimes the only way to still gain a modicum of enjoyment.
I like the it i can't wait for more please plz...........................................................................................................................
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Somewhat dense martial arts/cultivation novel.. uh
Great read, definetly perfect for those who wants to get rid of that system itch bu maybe not suitable for those who expect a serious story for this book is comedy al the way
This book is really expensive to read. I hope it will become fast paced.
It's a great concept but, sadly, it has been very poorly executed (I think an 8 yr old could have written it better)
Crazily fast-paced progression makes his "accomplishments" seem uninterestingly mediocre at best...
The fact that he becomes a man-slut as soon as he gets "powers" just makes it even more boring to read...
Closing Remark(s): This novel isn't worth the effort it would take to think of one...
Great story not your typical video game one. One that has heart.
