This thing right here, this novel the author made, this friccing guy made a good novel and no one notices it while some random dude wrote a novel full of normal cliché and tropes and get like 1000+ power stones like bro
just another kind of story where idiot mc got it's cheat... maybe for some people reading the idiot mc is funny but just not for my plate. the idea of the story is great but author love to be the smartest one so he make the mc become the idiot one. #shunshin#
Good story .Very detailed .I have never read a NPC story ,but I liked it .This story has good potential .Keep it up author .We need more updates !!
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I love this story, fun, interesting, logical, and so much more. Totally recommend reading this. Keep up the good work bro. By the way, you should make a Discord, or Patreon.
The first chapter was enough to hook me. The plotline, writing style, and characterization were great. I like the voice that the characters emit. I think it could be better if some paragraphs were to be divided since it was too long and the main idea was different from the other part. That was just my concern, but overall it was a really great story.
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
The storyline is very interesting and I sure I'm going to fall in love with the book once I start reading it.I am definitely adding it to my library
Knee jerk review as of chapter 10. I'm all about the beginning few chapters of being high importance as that's what makes me keep reading. So spoilers are here but only up to chap 10.It's so far The Rising of the Shield Hero but edgier. Generic MC and backstory, the classic bullied by everyone, he's useless, powerless, etc, then gets crazy powers, and a system to boot. The writing can be repetitive and at times is so choppy it becomes tedious to read. World building is glossed over more or less as he "studied in the library" and knows most everything of importance. Level scaling, explanation of magic, just a general sense of what is "strong" to be able to compare to isn't their either in my opinion. He also levels up insanely quickly as it seems killing single wolves while he's way above their level still garners him a fair amount of exp. Which is also never mentioned or shown, he just levels up instead. So the sense of progression isn't there and it begs the question why not just cheese it and power level off of weak beings. Why even need a slave? He says he needs a meat Shield but he seems to be doing fine on his own. Even going out gaining like 3 levels with ease just after he gets the slave and this is while it's recovering. Overall it's pretty middle of the road, not really doing anything new or interesting. I may pick it up time to time to see if it gets better or maybe skip a few chapters ahead and deal with the lost information. Like I said the beginning is the most important to me as it sets all my expectations for the whole book and right now I'm just kinda "eh" ?u200d♂️ Also I have no idea about updating stability, so freebie 5 stars lol.
I was just got hooked because of the trial read, then I found out this one is really different.
something to my taste; a little bit different compared to the typical system-based novels; a new approach and of course thought raising story.
I liked it so far (20chapters). hope it gets picked up later on.
I've read the mtl of this and oh boy, this is a total disaster. Not worth it.
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