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Xo far i am liking tnis story . It has a unique storyline and I am finding it a relaxing read. While i hope to see some action, I hope the author will keep it in the same style that the have established. Please no outlandish acts . ThebMCis a old man don't have him doing young foolishness
Hey! I'm the translator, Shiraishi. Since I'm also limited to 140 characters, I'll only say this. I hope you enjoy the story, and if you have any issue, don't hesitate to leave a comment.
It started out good, the plot quickly took place and I like how there isn't any filler chapters. However, after a while, it gets repetitive. Going for dungeons, protagonist explaining the strategy, team wipe, etc.
To be honest, the characters are plain annoying, especially how the author makes all the female characters soooo annoying. And makes them all having nice figures and whatever, it makes me disappointed and mad. The characters are the ones turning me away from this story, they are so cliche and annoying.
Why does the author make all the female characters so stupid? The only female character that hasn't made a bad impression on me is the guild master of the all-girls guild. Geez.
Thanks for all the hard work, translators and author.
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Don’t waste your time and coins it’s a garbage novel by a garbage author who has problems in the head
Mystical Journey is one of my favourite things to read on Qidian lately, and it doesn't seem to be having any issues in delivering to expectations up and giving the readers something to enjoy.
If you haven't read this yet, it's basically about a Chinese guy who died and through luck and fortune ended up being the only surviving person to successfully be transported to another world. He first tries to adapt and live life like normal, but is thrown into a world beyond his imaginations and seeks power. He is a talented martial artist who is assisted by a game-like system that isn't overpowered and requires 'potential points' that is gained from external sources. (currently unknown). He fights, develops, and gets stronger in a nice and enjoyable way that we readers can mostly accept and acknowledge that he deserves where he is from the effort he has put. However, he isn't limited to these worlds and travels to other worlds and attempts to be the strongest there as well in order to be 'free' and to fulfil his dream of being the strongest martial artist. Currently, he has travelled to two unique and different worlds.
Stability of Updates
-There is always two chapters every day. That's 14 chapters a week!
-Problem is, there have been some occasions that get me and ALL other readers annoyed which is that some chapters get DUPLICATED! (Currently has occurred twice, goodbye SS)
Story Development
-The story develops at a consistent rate.
-Unique or at least different to most other stories with similar game systems.
-Not all characters are forgotten and sometimes they leave lasting impressions and even create real feelings due to betrayal and death.
Character Design
-Most characters are unique and have impacts on the MC and story.
-Some characters are forgotten/have no meaning but that can't be helped when there are so many to keep track of.
-MC develops properly or at least something I can accept instead of some other dumb stories that have outlandish and stupid motivators/ character actions.
World Background-
Good, im just gonna keep it short because I want to get to translation quality... and oh boy..
Translation Quality.
-TERIRIBLE
-UNREADABLE
-Okay, I was just overexaggerating there but recently, it HAS been TERRIBLE. Read Chapter 305, and you will understand. PLEASE GET A NEW TRANSLATOR/EDITOR. It is no joke a bot, if not someone who just doesn't care and is trolling.
-And to be serious, I'm pretty sure it the quality was good at least at the beginning. Halfway through the first world or 100+ish chapters, there was barely any mistakes. After the quality just started to drop and has now plummeted. For example...
CHP-305 [""Do not kill me, beg you, don’t do not!" The girl cried splinters."] >And this is CONSISTENT in this chapter... [""Wwe are led directly by him, he knows tThe most, it was this is by his request that I came in contact with you! It’s none of Not my business!"]
This book is good, and if you want to read it, read it. But by the time you get to chapter 250+, get ready to drop unless your comitted or we have gotten a new transltor. SERIOUSLY, this is not even a joke! GET A NEW ONE PLEASE.
this novel is good writing isn't bad either and i also find mc a idiot for not making use of the future knowledge he has. this is very slow paced (I don't know if I'm the impatient one here) those who like romance type of novel should definitely try to read.
and I hope to author to make mc little more smart.
Nope nope nope nope. First chapter alone the amount of grammar mistakes makes me want to gouge my eyes out. This is a non native english speaker and maybe a terrible translator with it. Either missing words so you have to go back and read sentence again for it to kind of make sense or they just don't make any sense at all
AAAAAAAAAAAH! This is so great! I'm hooked already... It's quite different from other "System" type novels, which is refreshing. Can't wait for the next update.
so he got transmigrated, found his job too hard, didn't bother to learn and manage it, pushed responsibility to his father then kept collecting the money, now he's slacking off in vr. there's harem tag too? I can already imagine the kind mc this is
Nice novel with and interesting story. Recomanded to read!
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Dear Author is this novel completed? are you on a break or has this novel been dropped?
