Your poems are beautiful dear author!!I look forward to your update everyday.. the lines are simply superb.. it's like you can feel what I feel and you put those feelings into words..You are too good.. continue writing ????
The book tells about the reality of life........ The struggle of people living in abject poverty.......... I commend the main character's struggle for freedom from such a depressing life......... Honestly I'm really liking this book. Good job author
looks like a great novel that i will add to my library and check out when i get the chance..................................................
I have just read the introduction and the story is sooo captivating that I can bet, only after the introduction anyone would love to know the story. The writing style is hooking, and the plot is unique and interesting. This book has the potential to stand out. All the best author with your journey! It's a must-read book. ✨
So I came here for a review swap and wasn't sure what to expect going into this book. I recently got out of my Books with Systems phase and was quite tired of all the systems that were A) cute, fluffy but utterly useless and B) cold, mechanical, calculative and just using the mc for its gain (and the mc that is given no choice but to obey albeit unwilling). Imagine how elated I was when here comes a system that HELPS the mc. Even if Genesis doesn't give out impromptu missions like a game (I like this), just the originality of the borrowing system sold the story to me. Plot wise, I have nothing to say. 5 stars. The author was more focused on character development than world building in the first few chapters but luckily it didn't drag on for too long. Mysteries and more Genesis scenes prompted me to not skip-read, and I'm glad I didn't.The MC is smart, hilarious and the way his system functions is definitely the most unique one I have ever read. The only problem is sometimes the past and present tenses get mixed up and I get confused.All in all, this is an intriguing and interesting story. If the grammar errors can be corrected, I will rate it perfect stars. Best of luck author!
What I like the most in this story is the character. They are very light, the whole story is. This feel very refreshing and again, light. I hope there will be more chapters
Dog**** spelling and grammar. Its like MTL. As of chapter 10 or so, the world building is great though. ..... ............. .. .. . ............
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Waiting on next chapter senpai. Keep being awesome! I love your writing style. After I read a chapter by you, I feel inspired to continue writing. So, no matter what, you can't quit. Your story is legendary. Love you senpai!Yours truly, Ellendria
An amazing book. The concept of getting his powers and having to fulfill something other than just randomly exploring is also a good thing because it gives mc something to work up to.?
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It's a hobby of mine to give other author story a 5 star rating, no matter if the story is good or bad, no matter if it's about something that i know or not, since as an author myself, i know how much joy does a good review brought to the writer.Also, as far as the story goes, it is good, but it's not my cup of tea.