Do not waste your time
I love how the author draws us into the emotions of the character. I felt so bad for AJ in the beginning, the story is well written, some minor mistakes but nothing that could be noticed too much. AJ is so mysterious, and even though he is a genius he still has flaws and shows a more human side. Unlike some characters that are just too perfect AJ feels really real in the story. I fully recommend this book! Keep up the great work Author~san.
love it .......................................................................................................................................................stupid 140 character needed to leave a review amazing book
i hope u can edit the first few chaps... good job
i hope u can edit the first few chaps... good job
i hope u can edit the first few chaps... good job
i hope u can edit the first few chaps... good job
i hope u can edit the first few chaps... good job
Worth a read and hopes it gets picked! Similiar to “The world online” but also different in its own ways. There are a few problems or annoying things in the story but overall they are easy to set aside to enjoy the story and character, especially if you like the premise of this type of story like i do.
0w0 I felt really bad that a nice story like this was sitting here rotting with no reviews, so I rated it!
1. Writing quality is really good (as stated above)
2. Stability of updates is good, if you count out the occasional few day gap.
3. Story development is ok, but I think you can do better
4. Character design is a hard one, but I personally like the ring & stuff so yeah.
5. I don't even know what the hell is world background, so no comments on that.
This is my first time that i am giving a review of a story and i think this is good story from my point view even though there are not many chapters now but still the character development is very good.
Pretty cool. Though I don't agree with all social ideas in the book, it is interesting and well argued.
This is a true realistic story. I see potential in this story. Keep up the good work there author! I'm loving the different POV of every characters, it feels like i'm reading a comic.
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It really isn’t that bad compared to other major racist and nationalistic novels. The only thing the novel that is bad is that Japan has poor security. Like have you seen the mythological something gene novel. Other than that the novel seems pretty interesting ofc 40 chapters isnt enough to tell if its good or not
I just read the 1st chapter after having had this novel for a long time in my library and it promises a lot of reading pleasure, however I remember that there was a chapter which reca** the energy cultivation levels but it is no longer there I wonder if you could put it back for ease of understanding when reading.