Good story author. Just a little action missing. You should take some ideas from story ‘Peace Online- India’ for warfare and tactics. And how a king should command .
Honestly I tried, but after 60 chapters I can't handle the constant reminded of that one person being an angelic beauty or that other person being handsome whatever.
Plus if I have to read the words "blue haired boy" one more time, I'm going to punch someone through the teeth.
Overall, it's an awesome book so far. I've been having trouble finding something that could draw me in and keep me hooked and this one really hit the spot, I can't wait for more chapters and hope the quality keeps up. Thanks for the awesome read
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Background - good )
Fluid storytelling - excellent )
human interaction - good )
explanation source of the system and future progress )
Not many cliches )
good grammar and minimum error )
Оverall score 4.5 \\ 5. But if you take into account the general trend of this site, you can safely give even 5 \\ 5. Webnovel publishes fewer and fewer truly worthy stories. Recently, only copy-paste garbage.
Fantastic Story. I'm Not a spam bot, this really is a LN worth 5 stars. It is a cultivation SciFi LN. It starts of slow at first, but picks up later on in the chapters. Very immersive world and story line. All LNs have plot-armor. The plot armor does NOT seem to be all that heavy in this LN. This one just doesn't have a huge amount of it which is very good. It is a fun read. I know I haven't said much about the LN. The problem is that I feel if I say anything about at all it will be filled with a lot of Spoilers and this story is to good to spoil it for others. HOWEVER *** SPOILERS SPOILERS SPOILERS *** Yes it is SciFi to the point of a Universe filled with awesome aliens. There are alien bloodlines in this LN that can be used to enhance the different characters in the LN.
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Absolutely love this novel! Author if you're reading this I have to thank you for writing such a great novel! The only thing I have to say about it is the updates. I'm not pushing for updates because making such a masterpiece takes time but I wish I could read thousands of chapters.
On a serious note, keep up the great work Author! And if you're wondering if you should read this you absolutely must do so.
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I always love the concept of a virtual reality novel. But the popular ones so far pisses me off and irks me, The first few chaps were a lil confusing and I feel like author missed a few words or sentences that were absolutely needed for the smooth transition of main character but aside from that alls good. Hope author keeps up the great work.
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Very good one of the best i have read in a very long time i hope this doesn't get dropped and has a lot more chapters it is to good to be dropped
Dis book is wonderful pls update the suspense is killing me
It's a very interesting book I wonder how the competition will be or if he gets d girl how it ends overall it's a very interesting book