Overall good but the chapters are short when i start a chapter i already find myself at the end then i get sad because its over as soon as it started.
A nice novel it is.Thats all I can say, I will give 5 stars idk why.Oh btw all reviews shouldnt be less than friggin 140 characters what the heck I dont want to write long reviews on the world background/character design because I think I couldnt write better than the authors.
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Author reporting for duty !I made this realistic novel since I need a break of the fantasy novel I'm currently writing (Half-Giant Time Traveller). Read the description to know more about the novel.Anyway I write this for fun in my spare time. If you have a suggestion please write a constructive one. That is more appreciated than any cheer/hate review. Anything to make me a better author is appreciated.Cheers and enjoy!
Hey this is Brandon gould I just read chapter 4 of Insect King and it is very interesting and I enjoyed it. But I think if you expand on detail for your world like if you told me a little more about Maxazar's character and The Suprme Lord I just would not mind knowing what some of your people look like, and you could expand in detail on what the world will look lik as wellThese are just suggestions I like your book as well as the feedback you give me I am giving you advice to help you
This is story it´s badly writen, and it´s a problem of the author not of the translator. Not a problem with the plot but there are a few of things that make me drop this in the third chapter:-In the first chapter the author JUSTIFIES the narrator, and he did it quite badly.-The narrator voice, the MC, wow... it is really anoying, and it´s not believable thats not the voice of a seven years old.-THE SPOILERS, the author just throw a lot of sopilers inside his story.
It's a pretty interesting novel with a concept that i recently saw in Slime Anime. The mc's character seems subpar but I am willing to give it a chance.
Writing Quality = GoodStability Updare = Really GoodBut as for the rest.. Bad...Paragon of destruction = Paragon of averageFirst point, MC doesn't seem to be logical at all, he threw golden opportunity to train just because he want to find a shortcut (that doesnt exist) or can't handle the training.Second point, MC does stupid logical decision even if the best answer/solution is slapped at his face, he goes full retard because of plot (?)Third point, the MC is AVERAGE, he doesnt have any talent whatsoever; what he has is the forbidden real, that from what is shown is not even that 'legendary', an example of a (my imaginary) scale:Common - Rare - Rare+ - Epic - LegendaryThe forbidden realm is only at Rare, or at max between Rare and Rare+But the worst point is that 'this advantage' that he has on the forbidden realm IS USELESS; he has a forbidden realm that is only mentioned at the start of the novel and during chapter 50 from what I understood, and nothing. We know nothing about the forbidden realm, what it is exactly, what type it is, NOTHING, he doesn even use it; and we are already 100+ chapters in.
Why do people write things in english if its not their native language? Its like this was written by a child and then put through google translate.
Is a really good novel with a different vibe than other cultivation novels the author is Also a pretty nice dude I know him from the discord channel that he has opened and would recommend to those that like the novel to join us I have the role of direct disciple there with the name "Intil_O".???????The last part is just to complete the word count but is genuine.
I really like this book and the mc's character of his ruthless even the way he handled his dead teacher not with complete trust but respect or the way he treats his girl xiao( especially him not being submissive just because she is a girl). And his goal to reach the pinnacle just love it we need more. Thank you
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