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B.faloo,....,,
Frustrating trash. Don't waste your time.
Frustrating trash. Don't waste your time.
Frustrating trash. Don't waste your time.
Frustrating trash. Don't waste your time.
this one is good but gets to chinesey in the first two worlds like Buddhist are the bad guys and martial arts is a national requirement. I get the second one but not the first. but the synopsis gets it wrong he has the system already.
Love this story. Can't wait for more; although, I would really like to see them go back to the acadamy soon to visit. Of course they need to deal with the Nine Tails Sect first.
It's a pretty good novel. I hope it gets picked........................................................................................................
Dark of night and waxing moon
come to us a single pool
hear us sing our witches' song
and send us moonlight clear and strong
Earth and water, wind and fire
one and all you must conspire
to banish bad for goodness sake
cos I need moonshine for my cake
Weary travelers long ago
shared their bread and made a vow
that they will be forever friends
and so shall be until time ends
Starting Off the grammar Is quite poor with random missing words and sentences that make zero sense to native English speakers. The world background is quite poor with the MC essentially having been attempted murdered but seems nothing happened to that person And MC doesn’t sue or anything. There is no real reason given in the game why the AI decided to skip steps beyond O well. Then when set in the fighting zone MC goes from running and struggling with a single mob to somehow being able to nuke 13 after a single level gain with the fight magically just being complete. The plot armor here would make a nuclear superpower scared to attack. It makes no sense and this ruins the story.
Hm. How to describe this.....well I like it enough to say. I want it to picked. I want it to picked. I want it to be picked. Word count over.
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This is for your dedication even though ur novel doesn't have many readers yet. Good luck, may this review help you to keep writing [img=recommend]
Time to write what you think guys, review it and tell me your preferences...
Though I really hope it will be 5 stars, I wouldn't shy away from the truth. It's a promise.
Arigato!!!