It’s good and all…. But want this the book that never had it’s ending?
Sad really. Bit on wattpad and fanfic.net this master peace of action adventure, learning and of lemons and limes was never to be completed.
The thought and imagination put into this book is absolutely splendid! The characterS and the beasts were described meticulously. My favorite part was when Lucas and the humanoid mantis faced of each other. Looking forward to reading more chapters! :)
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I have to say the idea for the novel is really good and interesting enough to pull you in, however I have a list of things that could be improved upon.
- First of, excessive technicalities. I get that there are a lot of thoughts behind the magical sides of this novel for world-building's sake, however the made-up technical stuffs feels too much of a filler.
Even after reading the 50+ chapters, it feels like I've only read 10 chapters of other novels for how little things has happened.
Considering the word count per chapter, the excessive technicalities ended up affecting the story progression.
- Next is the MC's character being all over the place. It's like his character is suffering due to forceful attempts for comic relief.
During his time on earth before the tutorial, he feels like a goal-driven MC similar to korean MCs of the same novel genre. However when he entered the tutorial, he became more like an arrogant self-entitled chinese MC.
I don't know if it's to make him "cool", or "quirky" and set apart from the others because he used to be strong, but it feels more like he's being obnoxious.
- Then there's the case for author's hindsight.
Holding out details and explanations to what is actually happening behind the scenes is actually a double-edged weapon. Remember to always think of how things look like in your readers' eyes.
If you hold an information that will spoil the story for the readers if they know it early, then that's good. But if it turned out to be something that wouldn't change anything if known, or maybe make the readers anticipate what's going to happen, then you're merely taking away the readers' eyes.
It's a choice between mystery and later surprising revelation, and early revelation that could be looked forward to as to how it will turn out in the future.
to put it bluntly. it's absolute trash. don't be deceived by name and synopsis. it's just another Chinese novel with lots of young masters and face slaps. author says mc is 30, but mc acts like a 16 year old teenager. As far as the character development. what characters? apart from typical mc everyone is just the default typical young masters. almost all characters and sometimes even the names are the same. author deliberately tries to weaken mc every time. you can find this in almost every Chinese novels and most of them do a great job if they are all same. idk why this has so many 5 star reviews but many novels are doing better job even with same young masters face slaps. long novel short - mc has treasuure trove of knowledge left by his father. - mc didn't have strong allies but ridiculously strong enemies. - expect a young master face slaping almost every chapter and for no reason- mc has plot armour and power of will.- the end
IMHO, this is the one of the best novel about kingdom building and war I've ever read. Currently, I've already read all available chapters. I wish author continue such breathtaking novel. Good luck everyone!
caught up to the raws.. the novel is pretty nice.. unlike fantasy simulator and astral apostle which take lots of chapters in other realm this novel doesn't take that many chapters in each realm.. though most of the chapters are in other realms it doesn't take an unreasonable amount of chapters for each realm where story is mainly in other realm n there's barely anything happening in the real world(currently MC spent a significant amount of chapters in main world)another difference from the 2 novels is that there's no returning unless the entire simulation(traversal) is completed and once the simulation is completed there's nothing like returning to the same realm again(as of now) and millions of years have passed in those realms within a day in main world it seemstraversal isn't the power held only by the MC rather it's like cultivation in a cultivation worldit kinda seems to be a time stop during the traversal as millions of years pass by in the other realm per each day in main world but it's not yet that clear as MC's simulations have been pretty short lived like less than 30 years in other realm(as he had variety of reasons to leave early).. so even if he simulates for like 1000 years it would take a little more than 10 minutes in the real world(taking 1:3 million time ratio)
The best reading I've had in a long time. It was something that was quite a departure from the normal cliche, the waifu also felt nice.The author did great in this history
I'm not sure why this novel is getting low reviews as the world and character develops in a very unique way despite the generic troupes. All characters including the side one(despite not having much screen time) are quite distinct and to the point even the Young master troupe is genuinely refreshing for me in the 3rd or 4th appearance. At least read the free chapters and you will immediately start seeing the uniqueness
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