Amazing, well written novel. Its one of the hidden gems out there. Mysterious, powerful but balanced MC from what I gathered in the 4 chapters. But its still early stages as we still dont know much about the world or the MC himself. But so far, so good and defo worth reading.
This book is lit ❤️I love itLove itLove itAgain I love it .The story development , design is the best.Once again I love it Love it
This is a re-review and one with some honesty. First of all the story turned into something else than I intended, and it was actually worse in some parts than my first. I made the mc edgy for the sake of him being edgy. Elior is almost a character without flaws but I made him somewhat a hypocrite intentionally.The worldbuilding was dull, and honestly, I have saved up a few things for later parts. which turned out to be a bad decision.The writing quality is poor, and you will expect a lot of typos. If you don't fear it then feel free to continue. As for the story development and plot, it is above average with a few nice fight scenes, here and there. and the main idea of the book is pretty good.Like my other book, this one got its voice in the chapter 70s. Honestly, I still think the book is better than many on this site with all those flaws. Continue if you like and leave behind comments.
These chapters keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book it’s really good and maybe a sequel
a fantastic novel. has a light bit of comedy as well.Well thought out. MC is an extremely well written character.This is much better than most of the other works I h e perused on here. background world building writing quality, all excellent.granted the character won't develop much, its in his nature, which is expected and is completely in line with the story.I HIGHLY RECOMMEND giving this a good read.
this novel have some potentials , please don't drop it . wish u some luck mate ............................................................................
This is garbage too much why the mc so annoying
Plot is quite interesting. Writing was good as well as the characters backgrounds. Its a little bit different from the gaming novels. I Like it.! Keep it up author ! :D
This story has a great potential to become a good read if develop properly. However, there is a part that is bugging me. The protagonist said that he will never log out. How on earth will he sustain his body? Did he not need to eat or go in the toilet or take a bath for hygiene? Will he not die from starvation? He will need to log out to do all of those. Please give us a proper explanation about it. Well it is all that I was asking about. Though, is this going to be an harem because I hate those.
Author has been consistently delivering quality work. Although the fanfic has been interesting from the very start, it became much more interesting as the story progresses especially the latest chapters. I did not expect the author to deliver a work which can even match the quality of the original. Overall a very good book. 100% Recommended read.
Very good; will do a better review when the story gets further. MC's character is blah tbh; the other characters make this story shine otherwise I would think its just so so. Author clearly has a knack for making random side characters feel human which is great; when they are actually involved in the storyline and Chens background hah Wish it had more depth and perspective. Less ridiculous and realistic; y'know more tragedy, failure and worldbuilding. Almost a 100 chapters and all I know is the planets name. Last bits just my opinion lol
A very interesting and fresh take on the Harry Potter lore. I can't wait to see more of how Philip differentiates and develops as a character in relation to Harry. Great job and I sincerely hope you continue the story author. :)