The same premise of the girl being the victim do to this and that gets old really quick.
Agree with all the other comments. Needs edited badly. Missing details and jumps all over the place.
I like how you wrote this story ...
do you plan on writing Gideon's story??? I'm sooooooo eager to read it! Gideon has always fascinated me and I can't wait to read his story!
So sad that he gave up so quickly when his ego was injured. She, on the other hand, should have been more forthright. Looking forward to see what happens.
Good but I feel like it’s dragging out a little, it’s time for action!!
are more chapters coming
Your story writing is superb. I love all your stories. I love to see Tiffany head over heels for Jake and for their Happily Ever After.
Read the whole thing in two days love it
Rough, FL can't get a break.
Became a fan on WN and had to read this book too! Loved it as your other writings!!!
Nice story but the ending was a cliffhanger…. Is there going to be another part to the story