i absolutely love the development so far, the interaction between MC and the other characters is both funny and serious when needed to be, the world building is well done so far, ans the magic system seems to be very open ended which I love, good work so far
well I'd like to say that I've been on web novel for a couple of years now and I have never been except one other time so completely satisfied with a novel. what a great surprise to find a story that is not such a repeat of so many others. the characters are extremely interesting. and although it is eventually going to be somewhat of a harem novel I don't think the author is going to exploit it as such. I am looking forward to finding out more about the planet and its characteristics in the future chapters.
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A fantastic beginning to an engaging and entertaining novel with great potential. The story keeps readers hooked, building anticipation for the next scene. I highly encourage everyone to give it a try!
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If you're ready for a thrilling journey where interstellar travel is possible, a place where all humans are born with superpowers and abilities, this story is for you! Khthonia follows the journey of the half-breed Adonis, a silent and uncaring teenager, and his impulsive and mature friends, as they face impossible odds and unravel mysteries that could change their world forever.Expect rich world-building, intriguing characters, and cliffhangers that keep you turning the pages. Thank you for joining me on this adventure—I hope you enjoy the story as much as I enjoy writing it!
Pertamax ??? Thanks for the Books!!!!! ? ??Oh, nobody have given a review for this yet? Let me be the first to give all five stars for all five categories for your new book ????? We are all looking forward for the next chapters ???
I saw the feature so I’m here to support my fellow ifunnytard. The book looks very interesting so I really hope the author sticks with this and continues to write.
Wow. I really love this!Cannot wait to read more of the shenanigans between the female lead and male lead.Author sama, I absolutely love your writing style and cannot wait to see where this story leads.
Good writing style, and interesting story. But maybe you can more elaborate Carmila's revenge in prologue/chapter 1. In addition, don't forget a hook so the readers will be curious about the next chapter.
Full of action and suspense please we're waiting for the next chapter
The book is very below average if im being honest and there is one major flaw that makes it trash. Which for some reason is the mc he has no redeeming qualities and it’s like the author isn’t even sure of his own setting. The author states he actively chose to be a loner so you’d think he chose not to interact with ppl cuz it’s a hassle, wrong he didn’t chose to be a loner he had no choice he was an outcast someone who was picked on can’t stand up for himself and lacks self esteem if he actually chose to be a loner he’d be confident and would just find interactions boring. Additionally the mc is the definition of foolish despite being a loner who has all the time to think he never does so, he can’t even come to the simplest of conclusions or think rationally. At some point he doesn’t want to kill monsters to level up or survive he wanted to have a way to coexist or some bs, beta mentality I swr. If he actually chose solitude he wouldn’t let insults phase him or even care but it’s like he’s about to cry every time he’s insulted. The fact he hasn’t approached to speak to anyone during the entire situation and not once has he used that time to think of the future or analyze his current situation to maximize survival knowing that the kingdom is possibly hostile to him. The dudes really pathetic is all Ill say and he’s not even interesting or have a sense of humor it’s just sad reading this I’d honestly prefer his bully be the mc at least he has basic survival skills.