OMG I don’t know what country you are coming from but I didn’t start reading this because the grammar is soooooooooooo so so so soooo bad just in the introduction alone if your not from a English based nation write it in your own language then google translate it or something if you are then please go back to the third grade I’m sorry I don’t want to be mean and it actually sounded fairly decent from the introduction but if you write a book the very first requirement is to have a decent grammar in any language other wise it ruins the story and turns it into home work of some kind just trying to understand and in my honest opinion you need to get better and grammar or get a editor so people will not need to burn their brains out thinking about what your writing.
agh i enjoyed these 45 chapter , i hope i can skip time to read a 200 chapter to enjoy it more ...........................................................
SUGGESTION: READ THE REVIEWS BEFORE READING THE STORY SO AS NOT TO SPREAD TOO MUCH HATE AND INSULTS ON THE BOOK AND MC LATER( LIKE I DID).those are the comments i wrote hope they ll make u understand a bit about the mc mentality:"...aizz i just need to know if he ll change his stupid belief or find a compromise because as he is now he s just AN idiot.not saying he should go around killing women but to not even touch them while brutally handling men(like literally almost causes two men to force each other)...that s ridicoulous and make him much more of a shut in edgelord that takes women as something sacred(mega simp) than he would have been behaving normally""...i ve seen ur review nowmoral compass is absolutely flawed as his thought process is not normal as u commented.for the typos and ecc u barely notice them as i focus more on the story than the grammar itself .still while it presents an interesting(?) new approach to some, for many others the story just gets impossible to immerse in as i said before his thought process is not something many can immerse in unless u a shut in, that idolizes women with anime girl pillows and figurines." if u still want to read it? good for u. if not? glad i saved some of ur time.
the story looks interesting characters are well written or that what it seems. the is only one thing that bugs me is that the MC is too shallow(from my perspective) also the author should emphasize more on how the choices of MC impacts his life as well as the life of people around him.PS.keep up the good work up Author-kun there aren't many yandere romance novels here.
Ok, but it ended. You r lier so i won't read it
Hello Please, do you have a discord server or contact? I would like to discuss with you if possible .Also I like your story. Good job????????????????
The story is good but I think it strayed or should I say the story becomes confusing because there is no harmony making me conduse what the plot is...Romance/love? VRMOO? Fantacy?And it was skipping the experiences of the MC how he got strong and lvl up, struggle of his guild... it just suddenly got strong and had many opponents...Sorry, no offence intended
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The novel is well written. The chapters feel a little wordy to get through and there's a lot of information given, but it's interesting. The power system also feels fresh and interesting.
What ruins this story for me is that it puts itself in the setting of Perfect World, an already established novel. It's as if the author felt too lazy to make a world of their own.What is especially disappointing is that the synopsis doesn't even mention a bit of this, but is intentionally misleading. The story doesn't even feel like it will abide by the original novels plot, more like the author just took the names of the characters from Perfect World and bastardized it.
Surprisingly good. It's a misunderstanding story, so if it's your cup of tea I'd recommend it. To me, the misunderstandings are set up in a way that flows and is funny