Jeremy5108
An original and creative novel which smoothly blends 2 genres: reincarnation and modern gaming concepts. Author also has a stable update schedule, posting almost one chapter daily. This book is HIGHLY RECOMMENDED.
I love this story and the premises of it but I just have a couple things that I feel like for me are lowering the quality of the story. I have gotten to like chapter 105+ and I hate that we spent more chapters on the two girls he meant randomly than his parents and his family. I’d love to see some authentic family interactions not just when the MC wants something or is informing them of something. They fought to have him so we should see more of this relationship.
Second is I wish we have more character development for the MC cuz half the time he is emotionless and we barely see his emotions to people around him. I wish the story revolved around more about his family, school/teachers and maybe his other careers and business.
The harem thing is way to early for him as just a 11 yr old and it just feels weird.
Either way I’m barely hanging on to stay with this story and not give up half way so hopefully things get better down more chapters.
I really enjoy reading this book. Can you give me the raw links with uncensored content? I check but no chance... The chapter is edited and there's less content on the raw site.
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in the start in this novel MC is coward but letter it's gets better so it's good and story development also very good . I really want more chapter to come i just hope author don't put love and harem in it i like MC the way it's please focus on beasts rather then some stupid girls .
Genuinely disappointed in this story. It started out good, imo, but honestly goes downhill fast once the 10,000 races are introduced. MC starts killing off entire races and crowd commentaters are instantly heard and responded to. Broad generalizations are made, indicating all sentients in a group are thinking/responding in the exact same way. Old humans are behaving like immature teenagers. Final straw for me was the MC killing, cooking and eating one of the 10,000 races in front of the area they all live. That whole scene is just too disappointing for me to continue investing my time in this story when there are tons of other stories better worth my time.
Translation is okay, I’ve read a lot worse ones and bore with it for the story.
World setting is decent and I like some of the side characters.
So… overall, 2.5/5.0.
What the ****? Is this a fucking google translation? Is this a fucking joke? For **** sake qidian and bull**** "translator" get your **** together. You pulled a good one right there releasing half of a chapter in chinese and the other half in **** tier english.
Fuck you translator.
Fuck you qidian for putting people like that in charge of translation.
Fucking Cheers.
quite the interesting book to read
I LIKE IT!!! I've just read it for 2 hours and damn I can't get enough..
I'll be watching it now an addition to my treasure trove..
I hope there is more hahaha
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Really good one... Up up up... Recommend!!! Everyone let vote this novel....
Although I am too late, I wish that you win your WPC contest and take away the gold prize. I am your new reader and this novel was my first. I have to say that I am more than impressed. So I will be going to read your other novels. Good Luck and congrats in advance.
