PrimordialMaster
Pavel is best boi, you can't convince me otherwise.
Pretty great novel, not much to complain about besides the translation.. it’s a bit bad but seasoned readers with the Dao of understanding can easily read past it. Been a while since I’ve seen such a novel like this. Unfortunately the author isn’t updating it ?
it's a good refreshing novel n a breath of fresh air sadly dea r no more dan 5 stars available to give
Really good stuffKeep it coming Author..
Great story. Nice characters. Interesting world background. The development of the story is great. It's a one of a kind story which doesn't match with others of the same genre. I liked the story a lot. I hope the author keeps updating the novel.
The kind of book I love to read.I love how everything keeps unfolding especially with the Granians and all. They are very intelligent, and strong just like the humans or even more than them which makes me like the book even more. The Mc isn't the usual dumb kid we have out there, he is able to think well and come up with great ideas.The writing style is just good, the author's writing style is easy to read and understand, which makes the readers hooked to the story even more.I am anticipating a lot of bloodsheds which makes my blood boil so much, heh.Highly recommendable I must say. Try it out and thank me later. Author Jay, keep up the hard work. ?
El inicio de la historia está genial,pasamos de un mundo moderno a una época más antigua,las escenas de acción son detalladas y la construcción de mundo es interesante con los tipos de sangre
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I have no idea. But there are free FPs to do a review.
I've read your book author, it's really captivating story.. keep it up☺️
I am a Harry Potter Enthusiast, so due to interest, I have searched fan-fictions related to Harry Potter.And came across this one.After reading this, I found the start of this fan fiction very interesting and I hope more chapters come soon!
Shameless Review from the Translator?. But seriously it's a fun novel, do read it.This is my first translation work, I don't know if you would like it or not, but please read it and leave a review, even if it is a bad review, cause i need to knot what to improve. And if you find any mistakes please leave a comment. Thanks All. ?
