overall standard everyone gets blan I'm a God honestly one of the better premises butt the author repeatedly brok his own logic for no reason and mc has no personality its difficult to understand why he does anything he does
I'm at chapter 3. I like the gender bender concept of the story. I watched an anime before, sorry forgot the title, where the ml was turned into a girl. Lol. I love that kind of story.
Thank you very much for an invite for a free reading of your creation. The story is interesting, has a great detailed description, and is a prolific writer that knows his plot well, interesting as you go on with the chapters.
Good book.
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Cliche novel like the tunnel novels or the previous bunker apocalyptic novels with the overpowered system . Gets praised for selling water. Meets attractive women, Etc
Bro, you seriously need a editor. I mean it. if you want, you can contact me to help you with it and yes , please put some spaces/dash in between.
I've been bamboozled so many time with novels proclaiming to have evil main characters not only being completely different, but the fact that sakuna was used as the MC and isn't even remotely evil is just disappointing. Terrible way to ruin a good character with your pathetic wish fulfillment is just sad.
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more chaptersit a waste Of novel being shut down once you start something at least finish Its a waste Of talent
Interesting!
Fun!
Entertaining!
Comedy!
Action!
What do you want? They are all packed into This story.
The story plot is nice. Even though, there are some grammatical errors here and there, it's still very interesting