That’s my first novel hope you will enjoy it!
I’m improving with each chapter and always will try to release at the best and fastest time i can.
INTERESTING AND UNIQUE!
Though it's my first time reading a cultivator novel, I enjoyed it as I read the chapters. The plot is intriguing and the writing is easy to read. I also loved the idea, writing, character design and environment description in the novel. The synopsis is well written - short and to the point.
The story is little slowly paced for me. The cover can also be made a little interesting. Apart from these, I loved everything about the novel.
Keep Going!!
As a casual reader
I recommend this novel
This is an unique and beautiful peace of art
The only problem is the World background
Don't ask me why
Very good start. It is somehow cliche about a mysterious protagonist. The writing quality is pretty good and keep up the suspense. Has some plot holes but overall pretty good. I have high hope to this novel, please don't let become ****...
Love the start. Quite a funny main character. Love your work author. I like comedy. Keep updating love to read more. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
The vibe I have gotten from the story so far is that it's a slow burn. The author sacrificed meaningless early hype to build up the characters. As you get further in it gets better. I'd like a bit more info on the world though, it seems interesting. As for the characters... they're... ok, they're not bad, nor are they cardboard cutouts, but I'd like to see more until I decide how good they are. I look forward to see the story develop.
Side note... Jane is best girl... fight me.
Title: Thrilling Page-Turner!
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I have never read such a fantastic romantic harem story. Normally in the harem stories the quality of the romance is at the rock bottom. But this is a miracle, how can someone even imagine of such a fantastic story!!!!! I am really a very stone hearted person in my real life, and NEVER EVER cried while reading any stories or watching any movies. But this novel had beaten me to it, I literally cried my eyes red at some places in the story. Fantastic piece of work Author. Hope you will end your break soon. Best wishes for you.
Absolutely fantastic. So far I feel like the harem has progressed really well, nothing seems forced and although there are some women who I would love to see with the Mc ,the author does a really good job at limiting the pace of the harems growth. The story is pretty good so far and has kept me interested since the beginning. The writing is fantastically well done with very few spelling errors that you probably won’t even notice. The one and only problem I have with this novel is that there aren’t enough chapters, I cought up to the current chapter 78 and now I don’t know that to do
This ongoing WebNovel is a must-read for anyone who loves a good story. The author's writing style is so engaging and the world they've created is so immersive that I'm constantly captivated by the story. The characters are so well-developed that I feel like I know them personally, and the ongoing nature of the story only adds to the excitement and anticipation. I highly recommend this WebNovel!
Are we getting more chapters because it’s been 19 days what do you have a schedule because if I took the advance chapters is to be able to read, but having only two chapters from 388 to 390 and not be able to read them. It’s kind of frustrating, I don’t know the circumstances or the reason why did the delay but as a reader, I would appreciate a heads up or some information telling us readers this information. [information being there will be a delay of certain chapters for a certain amount of time] which we as funds will be happy to give and support.