Appreciate your effort author for your work It's really good read till now. Rooting for future chapters V Thanks
The novel is rushed, the world building isn't there, the characters including the MC are stale, the numbers are all over the place, one chapter it said he gained 100 million energy points, next chapter he has 20million, he gains powers without explaination or reason.This feels like a cheap novel with nothing interesting about it other than the initial concept.
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I mean I know in the synopsis it mentioned grammar problems... but if that isn't even done well it doesn't bode well for the acc story. You still want it to look promising.
It has a lot of potential.but I can't say to much about it . It doesn't currently have enough to rate it well yet! Give us more author....yes I read your post. Now gimmee.gghbb#rghgtujhbgggghhbvfddrthjjbgffthhbcfftuhvftghbffgjmcg univ yfetujbdsrjkbddyuvddhhhftjhf
Fuck ??. Since meeting Rose in the game, the novel I originally thought was interesting became Trash Novel.. ???????????.................... ?..................
Love it pls continue and have motivation to write more quickly thx for the entertainment thx??????????????????????????????
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Honestly I think it has potential. The negative is the MTL translation. I like the characters so far. He gets OP fast. The he/she's get switched a lot. If you can get past the translation quality it is a nice night read.
I put my self with this comment to have good flow of every turn of events
Is this novel still gonna get translation? Or is it dropped? Why is this happening
The world background is really nice .The store development is perfect. The characters are also good, they were created to perfection. .....