damn a continuation huh...
i ddnt even finish the first one yet
but the more chapters this one has...the better.
stack them up, stack them up.
The story is pretty good. I would definitely recommend it to some people. However, I’ve seen a lot of grammar errors. Especially the part with the word “you’re”. Instead of using “you’re” it uses “your”. But, it isn’t to the point where you can’t even read it. 8/10, would recommend. :)
It's not too bad I've seen a lot better but I've also seen a lot worse the only problem is with so many bad reviews on not sure if enough people will open chapters with coins to keep this story going
Nice keep going
Hi, I'm the author of the book, voting for my own book as a classic webnovel tradition. Don't be fooled by me:)
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Hi, I'm the author of the book, voting for my own book as a classic webnovel tradition. Don't be fooled by me:)
Hi, I'm the author of the book, voting for my own book as a classic webnovel tradition. Don't be fooled by me:)
I found the opening to the book really intriguing. I like the writing style. Very good read. I’m looking forward to more chapters coming out. Keep up the good work!
I just start reading the story; I want more!!! You had me hooked on the first chapter! I hope you finish the story.
Awesome, just it.It's an isekai novel, but different all I've read before.I'm really enjoying.The form he organizes the world, all the things. Everything has a good structure and is working very well.The way that the people live with magic, all the society is built around it.Not just it, but the kingdom organization, the army, all the secret societies. It's all wonderful.Any chance to see it in a manhua?
Cliche and boRing, But you can use it to waste time if you skim the bad parts Lvk j k jchoi pufzpufxipjdog pig upf if if if ti upd pudoudupd
A mafia-themed VR novel? Unique, and unlike anything I've seen before. This story is amazing, the plotline, superb. Stepping into the life of Zen Taro certainly is interesting, although I won't go into any details out of fear of spoiling what is to come, hehe. But, I highly recommend this novel, and you can be d*mn sure whatever Destiny_Aitsuji writes is top notch.
It was already my everyday habit. My day would not be complete if i missed. I really enjoy reading this book. So suspense that I cant predict whats going to be happen next.
another trash Chinese novel added to its bunch. there is nothing here but face slapping. these are written by very untalented garbage level authors just to make money by cheating either novice readers or day dreamers. i wish it is possible to give a rating below 1 star.