Kroxius
Petition to ban the auther for giving me brain damage ,and I read till chapter 30,it's brain cancer inducing rubbish heap of a thirsty auther with nothing better to do.
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I've written a significant part of this novel before posting it, well not significant but enough of it. it's basically a slice of life cultivation novel, but not the jovial kind, this is a slow burn with a main character focused on revenge and getting stronger. facets and aspects of cultivation would be explored in more depth than is seen in most other novels, there will be politics, questionable decisions, mature themes, wars, and perhaps a little bit of army building. maybe a city or sect building adventure, but who knows. unlike all my other novels, this one does not have a system of any sort. everything is as realistic as I can possibly make it, chronicling the corruption of an innocent boy due to tragedies of life into a villain that quite frankly is as flawed and raw and real as anyone else. he doesn't win all his battles, he looses some, he runs away some times, but he always comes out on top. I'll try not rely too much on plot armor, just hard work and guts and maybe some luck. also fair warning this is a Harem story, however it's not a romantic one. please give this a chance, thanks so much for reading.
One of the best stories I have seen. It has low chapters for now! But I hope the author can update more!!!
I will see where the story develops from now on
[Final Score] ⭐⭐⭐⭐
[Writing Quality] ⭐⭐⭐⭐
Pretty good, a few typos here and there but they aren't common.
[Stability of Updates] ⭐⭐⭐
The author can miss a day or two but the usual upload schedule is once a day
[Story Development] ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
It's a pretty good novel I must say. The main character starts off as irritating and does dumb mistakes but he learns from them and doesn't repeat them. I really liked the idea of vampires who were at the top of the chain, feared by all turning into an oppressed race and slowly but surely starting to stand for themselves to overpower every opposer and stand proud as the strongest and feared race
[Character Design] ⭐⭐⭐
The character designs are not bad, they're what you expect of a vampire novel.
[World Background] ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
Absolutely love the lore behind the world and I hope we'll get more info on different countries, kingdoms, religions, etc.
it's bad. The description was interesting and the first chapter was good but the moment he lands back in time, we get the cliche young master wanting women scenario. His focus should be to raise his strength instead of hitting on women right of the bat.
Honestly, there are 100s of novels like this one out there. Not original in the slightest. MC is literally a moron which holds true from the first chapter title.
all in all, it's bad.
I have read the novel Frist 20 chapters and it was really interesting and great to read . even better than the description ❤️☺️❤️☺️❤️☺️❤️☺️❤️☺️❤️☺️ It is both funny and amazing novel. Hope the author will continue like that
yikes..
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half of all the chapters is stuff from previous chapters. really annoying to read, it was said you would fix that but not seeing anything changed
I think the story is amazing and very interesting. I would recommend to others, but this is just my opinion. Also have a great day everyone.
An excellent novel with a superb plot and top quality writing.
In addition, updates are regular.
There is nothing else to say. The novel fully deserves these 5 stars.
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