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First of all thanks for all the hard work. lets star by basics:Writing Quality "4"- Its good to see all author comments inside chapters its funny it suits the story well. Grammar is nice and it keep you to read all that u actually wrote and not just scroll trow it like in some other novels your`s actually keep me to read it normally so that big plus.Stability of Upadate "4"- Would be nice to keep it stable of 7chap/week but its proly hard for you with school and other irl stuff so i wont say much just that i would be nice to see more chapters :D <3Story Development "4"- Its a cool concept of cultivation in modern time with a sprinkle of comedy and you`r combing it quite nice. Keep up the good work with that.Character Design "4"- Would be nice to see more complex or more depth characters. But still your doing nice job for now and i like it.World Background "3"- Cant give more for real. I will for sure give more later on when more things are introduce but still imo you should put more job in this place. Ill give some examples: You named the universe and realms and i know we will find out that later on but still is he now on planet or some pagoda flying in space? All i recall reading he woke up after leaveing earth but i dont get where is he now. I know its his master place but is it a planet or spaceship ;D Maybe i missed it somehow not sure. Also try writing on paper make a map of a world in ur mind. The with that u can see background of things more stadly and work on a story from that point of view. It will be maybe easy`r for you to move from there if u got blocked. Tho imo your doing really nice job for now and i really like the book. For everyone else who is reading i give big suggestion to start reading this novel if u havent and support author somehow . Its damn good read and its really nice change of pace of common MC type of OP/EZ KILL ALL etc... this one is damn special and amusing and i like him alot. Keep up the good work man ;) Best regards Salcho
I agree its a great story and not nearly as badly translated as most of babel novels stuff is which is where this story comes from but there are more then 500 chapters at novelhall.com while there arnt even 100 here
This book is amazing. I haven't read all of it but I can tell the story is going to be more awesome as it goes on. Wish you continue writing author! Tragedy theme novels are not my thing but honestly I can really feel the emotions your characters show. Really love it!!
I would like to give this story 4* but they just started posting nearly unedited MTLs as chapters without even bothering to lookup translation continuity. This is a translation publishing business that doesn't even bother trying to translate their stories.
The setting had so much potential, but the author failed to make any of it work. And the ending is absolutely terrible. Lots of sexism too.......................
The story is amazing and the narration is like the cherry on top-sweet, simple and in a non-hurried manner, which makes it a smooth read. The reader can instantly connect with the characters and their feelings, thanks to your narration. There are some mistakes- grammatical and omission of words. Also, often you use a particular word twice, sometimes in different context and other time in the same. These interrupts the flow and gives a kind of escape route to stop reading further. Apart from that, the plot, the character's development, the narration everything is awesome.
Good start-up story, but as it progresses, i find the MC quite dumb to the point of not even being to domineering -- a quality dragons possess innately. He easily submits to negotiations, suffers humiliation and let's grievances pass. And to think that he will be an 'INVINCIBLE DRAGON EMPEROR'...what a letdown.
I am really enjoying this reading. I like the special environment the author has created in this novel. It is really satisfing. I hope it will still entice my imagination. As for now, i really hope it gets more recognition. You earned it !
Machine translation from chapter 777. A good novel, but it's impossible to read further. :(___________________________________________________________
Probably the best trial read novel in a while, it is still a power fantasy but executed with more than two braincells. The novel seems pretty fun, it is not insane but by opposition to the rest of the trial read novels it might as well have been written by Shakespeare.