It’s pretty good so far all things considered . The plot is very good , these kinds of books are my favorite !! I want to read more and I really wish i could vote for it but I don’t know how :(
The yuri is strong! I like this one! I don't walk on the path of yuri... I run for the finish line to obtain the victory!
Well, I honestly think that this story has a lot of potential. It kinda reminds me of beggining after the end with a bit of differences here and there. Anyways, Goodluck author, keep it up!
I love this plot a human failed hybrid. Definitely recommend checking out. It is something you would usually see, but a different take on it. I automatically was finding myself reading more about Elizabeth Wilson's characteristics. I thought the vampire and Lycan background was pretty cool as well!!! Good job!!! Can't wait to read more chapters!!!
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was well write and thought out for the most part. I just wish some parts had more detail. example the skip of five years. wish there was a little more there like did they every get married or when did they complete the mating. also wish who was talking was put at the beginning of all chapter some didn't and I got confused
Much of the story doesn't make sense - at first. Why is all the fighting turn-based? Why do beasts still live after being killed? Why are so many characters dumb? Why do beast tamers get a monthly allowance? Replace the phrase 'spirit beast' with Pokimons and it makes more sense. All the main characters are children.
It just feels like someone crumpled a universe like a paper, accelerated its time by 15x. And let its people live in eternal torment. This has no plot.
kya plot hai bhai maja a gaya mujhe aur logon ka to pata nahi h lakin mai jarur ye waali novel pakka padhunga .Iamwaitingfor it to be released soonto read .
Hello, the author here!I thank you all for all the reviews and your support in general. I just wanted you to know that I see and appreciate every single like, comment and review!Hope you keep enjoying the novel!
This one is very interesting. The writing is easily one of the best part. I really like the main character. This one has a lot of potential. I’m very interested to see how this one plays out.
I’m not planning to read all chapters but I end up reading It all. i honestly find it refreshing. The plot hasn't any flaw atm, maybe because it was new. s. The story isn't slow nor fast phase. something I like. i just added this book to my library. i suggest to introduce more characters In some chapters. Good job