Very nice story . Keep going on . Well done
Only giving full reviews so that some public can come and chat with me so that we can together criticize this as i alone cant do it as it will me lonely and i dont want feel lonely, Beleive it
its really well written, but there is no world building or character descriptions. overall its an Alright story. Good work.[img=recommend][img=recommend]
A very good beginning. This author seems new and promising. I hope her all the best. I believe this novel will get better. Even if it’s harem, it must be good. Give it a good read everyone, you surely won’t regret it.
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the setting and characters is gripping and addictive and very well written.
But I'm a little disappointed that it's so short.
but good work author
A good novel and my favorite system with a op starting point but one thing is that the chapter is a little to slow. So PLZ update a little faster btw the novel is good and keep improving on how the MC will do in the future.
OK review time. The story was unintresting, not enough use of the system, took to long to get to the system benifets, too much slice of life. Good translation, story seems to be set in modern china with hints of a wider future universe (barley), character is generic orphan college boy with no gusto, overall not recommended for translation and not worth your time reading.
I definitely love this novel. ❤️
Amazing book with different cliffhangers and enthralling words. I will like to recommend it not to only readers but authors
although I'm writing this review pretty early in the story, I will take it down if it doesn't live to my expectations.
Unlike other stories I may just have the main character be a nobody or something like that, this character has that and the writer than multiple chapters to really allow you to feel relating to the character instead of simply using it as a plot device. This add depth and fleshes out the story as a whole.
One of better original novels on the site. It 's been a good story so far and just starting to get interesting. As always hoping for more regular updates to keep up the interest.
so far it's perfect, the beginning is very interesting..................................................................................................................