duike left for adventure but shang-a was sad because
tudak tudak puk puk! (punching?)
Good so far, i like the mc she's funny and unique. If her system had a face i imagine it would be rolling its eyes 24/7 because of their interactions together lol Looking forward to more!
TBH I am not really a fan of a dark fantasy story, heck I even wanted to drop it at the early chapters but I read till the latest chapter and I was glad because I almost missed gold.Note : try to read till chap 60 before dropping, because the story became enjoyable at that chapter.
Man, I love this concept. An immortal practicing magic. So far, the writing is good and the way the author describe the scenery, the characters, and cultivation seems better to me than other novels I've read. But I feel a bit stiff when reading it, just a bit. It's like, it's too good that it's too bad? Or mechanical like the other guy said? In short, when reading this novel, I feel like something's missing. I just hope the novel gets better the later the chapters. Anyway, I'm definitely reading this one.
interesting story.I can't wait to see how James story develop. The grammar need more work, but other then that the story is very captivating. I will definitely be back for more. good luck with your story
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Update this story more often please, i am really like this story :) And you use Jeonghan and Mingyu as your cover *Ps : Carat right here.. ^^
The story started pretty mysterious making me curious what will happen then I was dropped with a huge bomb of more confusion which I can't wait to see where will lead.So far, while being some mistakes here and there, I pretty much like it so I recommend everyone to give at least at try.You won't regret it.
if your looking for same as cultivation type novel system that work on its surrounding environment and much like the novel scheming system manga .then it's for you .if not then don't read it .it will kill your mood?my my I quit it.Reason I am not give this 1 star cause author sacks .I know who hard is to creat a novel that why .
the story is good so far but I want to read more as it goes on. this looks promising as a good read but I'll have to read more to really know.