An all round good read if you just want to chill, there are some mistakes here and there but nothing to annoying if your not overly pedantic. Recommend.
This story starts off with a good pace but lost traction real quick. He tells his family he’s from the future then he tells his best friend then he gets multiple girls involved like this is just a hearm starting novel so far I don’t want to sit here and read 24 chapters about how he’s going to cultivate and his his friends and family are going to learn magic. It’s so boring reading info dump after info dump. The story is all over the place and the main chars not likable. This novel isn’t for me.
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The premise is one thing and the chapters that followed really nailed it! Both storyline and pacing are great. Though there are minor typos, they are really impressive after knowing this is your first book. Keep up the good work!
I very much enjoy reading every single chapter of this novel.If I had to point out why I'm enjoying it that much, I'd reply "D&D".The world building, character design/development and the FEEL just reminds me of an awsome D&D session headed by an awsome DM. If you are looking for a novel with great but oftentimes dark humour, like a violently intelligent MC who, although with prior experience, has a snake's outlook on human society and just overall enjoy stories based on a party rather than an individual, YOU MUST READ THIS.
i just wanna say, "amazing and fantastic." i like the story about video game, from zero to hero and the story combine with fantasy and a little bit scifi.
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Thank god ISSTH completed before this sh***y war between QI and ww , still i am reading novels from both sites, chinese authors are great creators of imaginative world. If QI going to monopolise all the chinese novels and then putting paypal for reading novels, then i have to stop this amazing journey in chinese novels because i cant afford it. But i hope this doesn't happen.....