A very interesting and high quality book. Well written, very enjoyable to read. More or less unique story. Great job! Personally, I really liked it.
THIS BOOK IS PRETTY GOOD BUT EHAT MAKES THIS BOOK GARBAGE IS THE ATTITUDE OF THE MCS BEAST!! HE LETS HIS BEAST DO WHATEVER THEY WANT AND THEY ALWAYS POUT WHEN THEY DONT GET THERE WAY AND HES LETTING ONE OF HIS BEAST BE A BULLY TO OTHER BEAST IN THE SECRET REALM!! THIS BOOK WAS DOING OK BUT AFTER THE LAST LIKE 5-10 CHAPTERS IT BECAME GARBAGE!! I HOPE PEOPLE DONT READ IT AND I HOPE IT GETS TAKEN DOWN!!! UNLESS THE ATTITUDE AND THE BEASTS CHANGE THEN ITS NOT WORTH READING AND ITS BASICALLY SAYING ITS OK TO BULLY THE WEAK AND ALL THAT AND THROUGH TEMPER TANTRUMS WHEN THEY DONT GET WHAT THEY WANT!!!
Good novel so far after 30 odd chapters. I love how you mention that all of his memories were briefly restored making it so all his knowledge makes sense. Something many novel fail to mention making it so it is unnatural for them to remember thing so early on. Keep it up.
I've read this on scribblehub and what can I say aside from its good. Nice to see it spreading to other platforms.Looking forward to your other works.
amazing plot with many spoiled males ?? they sure need to be brought down a peg. I enjoyed to book so far and can't wait to continue with new chapters. :) there are a few grammar mistakes but book is still readable nicely. ?? well done author. recomending it to anyone ?❤
love this book very very very much... please update more. Hahaha I am a fan of traps XD TRAPS MUST RULE THE WORLD HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAH
Outstanding novel, well written with an awesome storyline. I am overly impressed with the writer and his way of thinking and writing. Exceptionally worth of 5 rating!
Sci-Fic genre is one of hardest.Me as a reader sometimes reading this kind of genre makes me slowpoke I can't understand the flow of their novel but this is amazing, the conflict of the novel site vividly. I easily catch up to the flow of the story. Kudos author keep it up.:c
Overall a pretty solid start to a novel. After reading the free chapters I can say it has set the stage excellently for a slow slice of life with a twist. The characters are realistic with quirks but not becoming stereotypes of caricatures . As for complaints its mostly minor things, there's rare but significant translation hiccups, the setting is mostly pretty uninspired, and there's only a limited number of chapters available currently. Otherwise the pacing is a little slow, and the MC does have a "system" of sorts which may be off putting to some.
What sort of Chinese corruption is this? There were plenty of other novels in trial read that had much more support then this novel. This novel will eventually fall into obscurity, they could have atleasted picked a novel that was better received, but we got this.
The writing is bad ,the story is good,the wirkd background is good ,the other characters are good but the biggest **** is that he has some absolute resistance that gives him 1000% resistance and yet he has to be careful to fight a beowolf,also its been a long time since he has give and taker and semblance copy yet he did not copy ozpins and the others ability,I think its a waste of time and people feeling if you wanted to nerf your character dont fuking give him things that make him over powered,honestly the things that were added by the author into the story are **** because he gives pkwers and then nerfs them
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