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This story is wonderful. Beyond that even! I couldn't put it down. Everything is so... I want more! Please give me more! I would recommend this story to everyone.
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la premisa de la historia va bien pero hay varias cosas por mejorar:
- la escritura no es muy buena, se entiende la idea pero la lectura no es fluida en general algunas cosas ni sentido tienen, en fin si pudiera mejorar la escritura ayudaría a la comprensión y mejoraría mucho la calidad de la historia
-el sistema esta mu op, esto no es malo pero si el autor no controla un poco esto puede que la historia se arruine luego, es algo que suele pasar siempre que la trampa o poder es muy op, porque todo se vuelve demasiado fácil, termina siendo un cumplimiento de deseos, a menos que de eso sea la historia?
dejando de lado esos 2 problemas la historia se ve buena aunque por el momento hay pocos caps entonces aun no hay una opinión clara
Haven't read it yet but it kinda sounds like the other novel The Most Generous Master Ever. For now I'll give it a 3 star until I finish the trial chapters.
Honestly the best written story on the trail run should definitely be picked it has great development potential and not like the rest of these cut and paste novels that get picked
I love the story so far and hope you will continue writing this novel and not drop it i can see this lasting a long time and I like how you made the mc op
This is the same novel as the previous trial novel that didn't even selected!
downvote for this novel!
gg webnovel!
#notgonnasupoortthisnovel
Shameless author here, I would rate my story 5/5.
This is my first story still i rate it very highly, i know
Not to toot my own horn but this is a really well-thought story with immense world-building and character design.
I hope you can excuse the not so impeccable grammar in the first couple of chapters.
The writing style improves as the story goes on trust me on this one
hm... where should i start, so the characters, the worldbuilding is just perfect to my taste. That said, this webnovel gives me real demon slayer vibes. And author, if you're reading this review, give us a few more chapters, I beg you. Pleeeaaaseee
Petition for Author-san to contenue "Supreme Authority"
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Wow, I'm looking forward to this story. Just the introduction of a character made me curious. It must be very exciting for the future. Excitement for the author. Hopefully everyone will always enjoy his works