Hello everyone, I am elong ma-, oh ... sorry, I am Aztecs. I'm sorry for not updating for a long time and for disappointing you. Since my phone was lost twice in which the notes were already gone, it's useless for me to recover it because somehow it's not in the cloud. I'm confused about whether to continue or not because maybe you guys might have forgotten the plot, and also I haven't watched Vtuber for a long time, but it doesn't matter if you guys want to encourage me to continue this novel ..., Then I will continue[img=fp]
extremely underrated novel one of the best in the past. Translation is also pretty much prefect
Wait, what?! My last comment was censored? Huzzah!! Huzzah!
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Its like another story of upgrade specialist in another world with a worst plot and writing style. it looks it got its idea in that novel so this novel is no no for me.
U deserve this even if the novel isnt great or is amazing. To be able to post 50+ chapters and not be rated is sad on the readers part. Hope this helps you
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Why must you get me hooked and it isn’t even in the 17th chapter
Amazing story I love the kind of duo personalities with when he is using his power and not using his power.
I love sadistic characters who are really smart so this story is kind of in my favorites of all time.
On the f###ing 16th chapter.
Nyghtwryter here, just wanted to thank you all for checking out the first draft of TLPOR. I gave my self a lower rating since I know my writing could use some improving and I’m brutally honest with myself.
Anyways, I thought at first I could rewrite a lot of content in 2 months, but it’s taking me a lot longer than I thought, to finish rewriting just one chapter, so it may be around 3-4 months, realistically to come back with enough to drop everyday.
I will at the same time, begin writing the sequel, Atlas’s Origins, during my free time. Not sure where I’ll post it, but I’ll make sure, to let y’all know!
TLDR:
Rewrite coming in 3-4 months
Atlas’s Origins (Sequel) coming soon
Grammar needs to be improved, otherwise it's a decent novel with an actual low key main character.
there have been low key mcs before but the moment someone does'nt give them "face" it's over with being low key. i hope this character stays low key even when he gets stronger.
writing quality: bad grammar but it is not unreadable.2.5 stars would mean average so I'll give you 2 stars
stability of updates: no clue only 3 chapters are out. I'll give you half stars so 3.
other things can't be judged with 3 chapters released.
Character design: I'll give you 3 stars, until now the characters are pretty generic and except for the mc no other characters were properly introduced, but as i said i'm eager to see a low key mc.
Keep the novel up!! do not abandon this novel, DO NOT FORGET TO GIVER SS to this novels guys. Please keep a schedule on this novel.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hahhaa belum sampai 100 bab sudah hiatus
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It feels empty. It feels like the protagonist is maintaining a facade, as opposed to acting naturally. I also can't help but question the practicality of certain events. Posing as a khilman, a supposed battle hardened maniac, that... decided to randomly investigate the appearance of beasts? If the idea was to avoid suspicion why even think to bring up the issue at all, especially when the protagonist insists on using the area as a hunting ground? The actions are completely contradictory, then you have him perform acts of great foresight, as though he planned such intricacies. I don't want an idiotic protagonist, but making him senselessly intelligent will only question the validity of all his actions. Why doesn't he simply have a change of clothes? Why doesn't he enter and leave the town at more reasonable hours to avoid attention? Why doesn't he utilise his makeup kit to take on an appearance or conjure a back story that perhaps gives credence to his late night shenanigans. I'm sure there will be some rationale later on that will somehow justify these actions, but I can't really understand how he can appear so shortsighted.