FaithlessnesslJY
Vol 7 Ch 30-40 he seals the deal with Lucia and they cook the rice after his assassination.
Not a story I would read. I feel nothing for the character.
i am here for the fast pass. but don't judge the book without reading it
Why it's just 2 chapters a week now, it's better than a lot of stupid novel on Qidian. Is Qidian targeting me or just my bad luck ? All the novel I dislike have more than 20 chapter a day, and the one I like drop or unstable for god sake why all the stupid harem/ arrogant master/ silly mc with bird brain are release all the time and the other almost drop. So annoying
I love ur story. Your writing style is too good , it has the necessary details without going overboard and also gripping.. it makes one want to know what's going to happen next.. and even i wish that the war would end and jun hua's love story begins... i am waiting
This is the most smoked story I've read so far, everything moves so fast that it gives me pain just thinking about it, but for people who like fanfics with invincible protagonists, it's fine.
Horrible. This author is what you could call a "Master of Wordcount." Every chapter is jam-packed with filler, and only filler. The story would be 500 chapters long if it weren't for all of the filler. I don't think that's an exaggeration.
The writing is also so cheesy, generic, and annoying to read that I actually can't tell if this story is satire or not. Everyone that isn't in the MC's circle acts like a generic cultivation novel villain despite this story taking place on modern Earth.
An interesting storyline, looking forward to seeing how the story unfolds. Story show variations from previously read stories. Hope to see new chapters soon
why do you even need fast pass what do they do almost every original book need fast pass after like 30-40 chapters not to mention 6 so what do you need them for
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I know the mc is supposed to be a nice person but when those 1000 or so people died I was kinda hoping he would be indifferent or just somewhat sad and guilty about it. Kinda hoping for an o well instead of a it wasn’t really my fault but I’ll go above and beyond to make it right. Would’ve have been a nice change from ur usual mc.
I really like your novel, i am not a native but i think your english is good. Nice story,detailed background, your mc is what it should be,not ***** and always thinking till the detail. A bit of slow but interesting. Overall the story is good. I appreciate your work. Keep it up . Thanks for the chap and nice job
