Honestly this is one of my favorite novels on this site and top 5 all time novels. I just wish it didn't lock at chapter 40, I would love to continue reading but I cant really afford to buy chapters atm.
This author really knows how to invest you in a story. It's been a comfy read so far, and it's easily reccomendable.
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The first chapter was pretty much flawless, so good job on that in terms of Grammer and punctuation. It establishes the mc's personality greatly, showing his goal, ambition, drive, and rhyme, reason, everything. It showed multiple forms of conflict and comedy, and also showed a ton of world building as well as mystery. It flowed smoothly and read like a full on professional novel. Good job author, this is one of the greatest first chaps I have seen.
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I’ll be giving an honest review.The good <3I must praise the author for the quick flow and creativity in the story. I love how he/she transitioned from the 1st to the 2nd chapter. We got a little glimpse of his past and straight into the main story. The world building for the isekai is definitely there. As for the real world, there were definitely some good details mixed in when the moment called for it.It’s a well thought out story with quite the knowledgeable author.The bad <3This isn’t from a story’s standpoint but more so on grammar and vocabulary.Some of the vocabulary uses were incorrect but I still understood them. Typos here and there but that’s normal.I feel that although the person is good at telling stories, he/she hasn’t been reading many novels in turn. A few of the formats are wonky such as the usage of commas and fullstops. I don’t know if it’s because i use mobile but most of the time, there are no fullstops. There are almost no commas after the “” speeches as well. And they use also “” for thoughts making it extremely confusing. I recommend changing thoughts to ‘ ‘ or italic font instead. But this shouldn’t bother most.What bothered me most however was the frequent change between past and present tense. If you choose to use past, then use it till the end please. I haven’t read that far but I did skip many chapters ahead to see if there were any improvements in the writing. Unfortunately it was quite constant but that could be because he/she wrote them all consecutively.It’s okay to take breaks between writing!I definitely recommend this novel. The bad has nothing to do with the story itself anyway and isn’t actually as bad as i make it out to be. I’m just a grammar nazi
mC sangat idiot super.Sikap yang kekanak - kanakanBerkata kalau novel favoritnya adalah wuxia atau xianxia, tetapi dia sendiri hampir tidak tahu semua yang berhubungan dengan wuxia.Dan seiring berjalannya chapter, mc semakin bertambah idiot dan selalu terkejut, terkejut.Astaga !!Kalau authornya ada di samping gue, gue bakalan getokin tu kepala Author, sudah membuat Mc super idiot.
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this book I ls really and a must read. the Grammer and look punctuation are up there with some good books I've read, the mystery and the twists were well done and executed in a way I didn't really expect, the author really did well with this book and I couldn't really find much that I didnt like in the story. it's we'll paced and the plot really grabs you and never lets go. good work author you made a really good and interesting story, keep it up
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