So in the end, I decided to rearrange the book into something that is more original. The plot will be mostly the same, and I will try to make it as original as possible. I'm sorry for those who waited for some actions to happen, but don't worry, there would be an 'extra' available in patreon.
"Sister Zhi!" Ying yelled, scandalized.
"Step into my parlor, said the spider to the birdie," A female voice called out to me. "Or as your friends call you in meatspace... Yata."
"Do you mind if you share a table with me?"
Mr Yi, are straight forward that the two looked funny. The interaction between them make her forget the emotions, hes like a big yet funny diversion.
I really like the story so far, but the missing points largely come from the translation quality being very questionable at many times and from some sentences/thoughts/actions being repeated multiple times in a row and across many chapters just in a VERY slightly different ways which I couldn't tell if they were translation/editing problems or word padding (but it really is pretty enjoyable once/if you can get past that)
agréable à lire et développement des évènements quelle peu excitant
Hate that Aldrich peaked at Eons status window and found out about him
interesting until now....................
So far really interesting and intriguing love the development of the story but the mc is kinda stupid hopefully he will get better. The grammar is good but there are some different names in different places. Still worth a read
The concept is a bit new and intriguing. The story is decent and the character development is pretty good. It was a good read, waiting for more chapters!!
The trio were excited to hear that he had a master. Con was the first to ask what they others were thinking.