alright, your book is perfect. Keep going the way you're going, and in time, you can be among the top novels. don't stop you, hear, keep writing.
This is pretty good, nothing crazy and you can tell some of dialogue is inspired by anime or something but it's not to the point where it's annoying to read. A lot of common tropes but they're done reasonably well.
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good story and all but why is it called the beast system I mean if he is only going to be a wolf then it should be call the warewolf system or something if its supposed to be called the beast system then it should have more than 1 beast
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I like the way you describe the world and the details .Not many authors focus on giving a good world background and lots of details since they think is boring.But I think your book has enough details and backgrounds .I enjoyed reading it even thought I am not into system novels .Keep going ! Love you !
You know, it's really disappointing when a promising story takes a nosedive into a cesspool of bigotry and an unhealthy obsession with blood relations. The initial chapters showed potential, but then it's like the author couldn't resist drowning the narrative in sexism and this bizarre blood fixation.Suddenly, 'blood' relatives are put on this pedestal, while the genuinely interesting 'non-blood' relationships are left in the dust. The main character's sudden favoritism towards 'blood' kin is both frustrating and off-putting. It's like the author forgot how to create meaningful connections beyond some arbitrary genetic link.What's worse is how this skewed perspective bleeds into the MC's actions. If you're not part of the 'blood' club, you're automatically relegated to the role of an outsider. Loyalty and support from non-blood companions are met with mistrust and scheming, which is incredibly jarring and makes it difficult to invest in the characters.The first 120 or so chapters were tolerable, but then the author went full-throttle on this 'blood' fixation, and it felt like a slap in the face for readers who were hoping for a more nuanced and inclusive narrative. It's a shame when an otherwise potentially enjoyable novel gets overshadowed by such regressive themes.
Great book, i'm in love with It, write more please!
This novel is one of the best VRMMORPG novels out there and one of my favourites.
The main character Yuan is dense and pure because of his condition and minimum interaction with society. But I guess thats reasonable over an edgy and cringe MC. But Character Development is quite slow compared to the story's overall pacing and I hope it develops.
Characters are well designed for each situation and helps keep the story going at a decent flow. (with the occasional face slapping ofc XD)
The Background of both the game and real world is well designed, but infomation on the Nine Heavens isn't fully revealed even from where Im at (Im at Chapter 444) and I hope it keeps growing without affecting the overall flow of the story.
The Writing is very good with little to no grammatical and spelling errors helping with the consistent immersion. But during some instances the scenery was briefly described which didn't help me fully picture the place in which the situation was going on.
The novel is very awesome overall and I would recommend anyone interested in reading Eastern Fantasyor Video Games to give this a try!
I would also like to give respect to the author for writing such a novel! Keep up the good work Author!
P.S. This is my first ever review if you see any mistakes please point them out and thank you for your time reading up to this point!
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Once a long time ago, a beautiful women, with large bouncy features, that liked to call herself king because she earned it after killing all her brothers, King Yama, decided to expand the universe in order to make a game for phantoms in the underworld!
After a long time of testing this new expanded universe, she said screw it and tossed some unlucky phantoms into that universe where even ghosts could make babies!
What will happen in this new expanded universe?
Find out in the next episode of random author's note!
This isn't the same author who wrote pocket hunting dimension, the author of pocket hunting dimension was only recommending this novel, that's all.