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Bom vou tentar dizer algumas coisas que deixaria a história melhor na minha humilde opinião, eu gosto de mc fodoes, mas fassa os outros personagem fazerem algo também, não deixe o mc carregar a história sozinha, pricipalemente elena já que ela parece ser a principal interesse amoroso até agora, gostaria de ver um casal forte tanto o homem quanto a mulher, que ela não dependa tanto dele, fassa ele depender dela tambem em futuras lutas, assim a história fica muito melhor do que só o mc fazer tudo sozinho enquanto suas mulheres depende dele, ae elas não conseguem fazer nada, até agora a história tá muito boa, eu gosto muito de romance eu me parece que vai ter um bom, o autor tá sabendo trabalhar a quimicas do casal até agora.Bom trabalho autor continua o bom trabalho e sucesso na suas futuras obras.Ps: gostaria de um harem pequeno bem trabalhado 2 ou 3 garotas ( o mundo tá acabando tem poucos humanos, porque não mais mulheres para almentar a população quando encontrarem um lugar seguro para viver no futuro não, enquanto tiver amor não importa !
Was a good read, looking forward for more chapters!And the names were uniqueHope i can also have the same naming sense like yours lol.Also, I hope you can give my novel a review too.Good luck on your novel!
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Lovely story... the mystery in the story is pretty interesting actually and the writing skills is pretty smooth and explain everything in details in a simple form the background story and the characters caught my attention full of actions , great job author keep it up
the story is realistic and greatly enjoyable. The characters Are human in their flaws, desires, and emotions letting you enjoy with immersion. you can feel the hardship and every small victory of Asher is one you cherish.
So this novel is firstly, not my cup of tea for now. I'm still going to keep track just in case it gets more interesting, but I'm not very invested for now. What makes this not my cup of tea is the constant dialogue that was happening. Instead of action there was words. I prefer action over words. One other problem that I had with this novel was the instant dive into the background of the whole. An instant dive into the background seems good, but the problem is that I was given no time to relate to the protagonist in anyway or simply put, I wasn't convinced to care about him. Also there were so many people that it becomes needlessly complicated in a sense. Basic summary of the story beware of SPOILERS for CH 1-14: The MC is the younger brother of the older brother and their parents are dead. They are nobility so they are in a comfortable situation. The MC's teacher is a transmigrator that failed and is getting rejected by the world. Also, other people are looking for an item held by the teacher or at least suspected to be with him. Lastly, the MC is trying to become a wizard.
Nice plot.Author is writing this novel with different concept and this concept is something i really fell in love with.Very nice novel with amazing plot.Waiting for more chapters to be uploaded
Everything so far in this novel is very good, I am impressed !!keep up the great work, author-san! =)<3333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333
This is a pretty accurate review considering the writing it terrible and feels like a copy paste translate and that many of the ratings are fake cause 10 5 stars for something j have a terrible time reading and understanding the most basic of sentences purely cause of miss typing let alone reuse of lazy and many others that define our MC like once or twice a paragraph. Man thiS was more of a rant but still holds true and there are other issues like character development and some other things But its to late for me but anyway the story is something i would not recommend
An excellent and epic story so far, it's coming along very nicely. I truly love it a lot. Randidly Ghost-hound is a brilliant made main character, his outlook is very interesting, I like him a lot. I hope to see more of this amazing story soon.