You are very good and you write very well! Everything I have read written by you is ✨✨✨✨✨ Good luck, man, and I hope you become a famous writer, successful as you deserve, internationally!?
been looking for something unique and this right here is what i want...5 stars..keep it up dude
This is a whole bunch of bull crap stitched together. I thought it would be in good system book it does not. He tried to do way too much and then his main character start off is cool cool calculator a good character you know it’s cool with the one little servant, girl whatever you know do your thing but now the authors are making him can’t do it dude you just destroyed a decent novel.
I've not started reading it but I love the synopsis ??
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mmmmm....................interesting!!!!
Really good story that really connects with the pain and struggle many of us go through. The story so far is really philosophical and mature, my biggest fear is that the system would become overbearing at one point but so far this novel is top tier. Keep up the good work!
Still waiting for more chapters here!!!!
I had to comment on this. I read all the chapters in free access and... it was terrible! I mean, it really inspired some kind of horror in me looking at the concept of the groundhog from this point of view. It didn't help that the author described in detail the reactions of both the MC and the viewers to what was happening. Overall, an impressive novel. Special thanks for the Eastern flavor.
I'm actually going to give my book, a shameless review. Because I know I tried,I pride myself in diligence in meticulous world crafting. First this is no Harem novel, except for those whose religion curtails having numerous partners. Just basically a slow romance.Second, I plan to write long, at the beginning I may start with few chapters a week, before I gradually compass and grow as a writer. Thereby writing numerous a week, I am thinking of stopping at 2000.Lastly do note that, I may make mistakes in the writing or history of a pantheon, I'm not an all rounder and this definitely part of the writing process.Thanks have a fun read. Lhav K.
an interesting first few chapters. writer knows how to build intrigue from the start.
Absolutely incredible novel, never gets boring and always something happening to put you on the edge and want to read more, I recommend this novel, one of the best ever put on this platform!!!