Worth the Read! Slow start but is picking up speed. As an author myself, I can see the building and placement for the future of the story. Like the MC, the author is building a foundation for a long Webnovel. I hope to see more chapters and more speedy updates!
Most of what I can say has been said by others already.Author and Qidian both have their problems.-------------need more words------------
Great novel.........
The writing style of the author is impersonal. It doesn’t let me immerse myself in the world and it feels like I’m just reading a documentary.The author is also very insistent on shoving information at you over and over again.C+ soul, increasing difficulty, feels bad but I’m calm, 800 something people died before me... Yeah, yeah. As if you haven’t written that for 5 times already.It’s not worth reading and this goes to show how Webnovel is choosing books that are deteriorating in quality
This chapter keeps getting better and better I can’t wait tell the next chapters so please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read it and please don’t stop writing this book
nationalism nationalism nationalism i am honestly wouldn't ever read stuffs like that unless i am a Chinese cause the more stuffs you read like this the more brain sieze would u be ! or maybe the opposite but i don't really want to discuss much about it just plane nationalism nothing else i
The novel is good to read and the story development and grammer is also good. But the downside is the luck stat is 99 and the mc can activate it almost on every battle, it would be best if it activates randomly or has a cooldown time and a particular condition to activate
This book is amazing, keep going!Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
An okay Story, but honestly nothing new or exciting that sets it apart. it seems to take huge amounts of joy in giving the mc stuff without really engaging with an interesting story.
One of my favourite wish fulfilment novels..
This story is giving me a stroke. It's really punishing to read. And the story! Well, it's just plain horrible. 100+ chapters in and it's only 3-4 days in the story. Lots of things happened in this 100 chapters, so many info dumps, so many events and so many women that I barely remember them at all. I stopped reading for a day and I barely remember what happened in this novel. Sayonara.I highly advise the author to use Grammarly, very useful for non-English speakers.
I need to talk about Su Mi's voice because it is ABSOLUTELY iconic and I am obsessed. 'Handsome guy, I saved your life. Don't forget to repay me when we meet again.' This note is everything. It's cheeky, it's confident, it's casually flirty without even trying, and it completely establishes who this character is in about forty words. She just performed surgery on a stranger, took photos of his unconscious body (which is... a choice), and left a note that reads like a playful threat wrapped in a flirtatious package. And then her internal monologue! 'That physique—tsk tsk tsk tsk~ That face—tsk tsk tsk tsk~' The tsk tsk tsk tsk is not a typo, it's a lifestyle. She's openly objectifying this guy while simultaneously being the one who saves his life, and the contrast is hilarious. She's not some demure heroine who's embarrassed by male attention—she's the attention. She's the one looking, the one judging, the one taking photos. The narrative voice itself is also worth noting. It's close third person, but it dips in and out of Su Mi's thoughts so seamlessly that you sometimes forget where narration ends and internal monologue begins. The author's tone is wry and slightly irreverent, especially when describing serious situations. A deputy regiment commander nearly dying? 'What a joke—a renowned surgeon in the international medical community, stumped by a simple gunshot wound?' Su Mi's arrogance here isn't unlikable because it's earned. She actually IS that good. Lu Jun'an's voice, even though we only get it through his confused thoughts and that one line—'Who exactly are you?'—feels distinct. He's formal, flustered, and genuinely annoyed. The contrast between their voices is going to be so much fun to watch develop.