Quake made by the commotion make embryz perplexed. As the formation breaks, he lay on a stone at the center of the formation to consolidate his will and strength.
'' What complex is that??? '' he asked.
Manchu breathed a sigh of relief and lowered his head, "Thank you for your hard work."
Anna recounts what Elanor said about her family and its connection to the Emerald family. John, for his part, nods as he scrunches his forehead in contemplation.
"$*&^!$&^%^&(%( $%#$%$&!?"
I love this novel I just hate how people see good novels then they copy it and that causes the original author to become sad and some times even quit writing just for their own profit but I know that the reason it happens is because some people are very jealous of others with more talent
Story is really interesting and entertaining, I had a great time reading, however I hope that author can fix the grammar mistakes because it ruins the immersion. It has great potential so keep up the good work!
i like the storyline .....can't wait for more chapters
So couple questions perizou...1. romance? Will we gEt there? I Feel bad for Mark...i dont want her and Lena to hook up. please stay away from Yuri. No problem with yuri overall just think with her mommy issues it will not work well for her2. she increases her INT stat each time she levels up, but i dont feel shes getting smarter. (Also im waiting for her to grasp that shes eventually gonna be goddess status with her charisma stat )3. i want Calvin to team up with them eventually cuz that accent is hot AF (pretty plz? ?)Overall, i love this story. youre building this world so well and i look forward to reading everytime it updates. Great Job!
It’s good and has a decent plot but it’s just all over the place and half the time I have no idea what’s happening. The grammar needs to be checked and the dialogue needs to change from just being cussing and have more coherent conversations. Other than that the books pretty good
This is my first writing a novel so it will be interesting...
the biggest problem in this book is development I'm 13 chapters in and feel like every chapters is missing chapters worth of context, info and development certain point in this chp that should of Been the main or one of the main climax of that chapter is just glossed over this doesn't happen once is every chapeterchp13 should of been 40-60 chapters long but is forced in and removing so much just to make it 13 its rushed