SecretlyAVillian
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If you pick up this story hopefully you're the type that likes history and geography. Especially bc some readers are quite generous and fill information for those that may be confused about certain things.Looking forward to the developments of this story!?
This story starts out kinda slow, Finally, it gets going in a traditional sort of Zombie apocalypse with a system kinda way. The thing is, the Protagonist is too big a scumbag. Personally, I would rather die than be forced to be someone's lackey. Correspondingly, I would never force someone else to be my slave or even follower. Uf nothing else, who wants to be surrounded by scum who would rather submit than to simply die? Yeah, and when he took the woman's pistol! Guns are sacred,. Kill someone, bit disarming them and leaving them alive is equivalent to spitting on their shadow!
Give you 5 star .. .. .Please dont drop this and updatr more chapter. .. .maybe someday he can use rasengan. ..And i like the part the mc little harem. ..
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So far the book has been good. I like the development of the story, but I feel that not much has been introduced in the world background of what's going on besides trying to save the world. As in the goddess role aside from creation, or the god of destruction role behind the demon Lord's. I feel like it should introduce more of those aspects to explain their existence. My opinion of the storyline is that it is set good, but it's at a fast pace for the amount for chapters it has. For example his strange feats through his childhood aren't explained, besides the little introduction related to a selective memory skill. The book in it self has a good grasp of the style of OP MC. Overall it is a good book that's just starting.
Nice.Had a fun time reading it, family, friend, love life all blend in together
Okay, let me just say this: the pacing in these two chapters is absolutely ruthless and I love it. You start with a chaotic street scene—people yelling about rabid dogs, Bai Bai slipping away, a man collapsing. It's frantic, noisy, overwhelming. Then the narrative drops you into the man's POV and suddenly everything slows down. His ribs hurt. He can't remember. He tries to stand and can't. The pain is described in this slow, methodical way that makes you feel every second. "Clutching his painful right ribs, every breath he took was accompanied by a piercing pain so sharp it made him lose his voice." That's the kind of sentence that forces you to slow your own breathing. The author is playing with tempo here—chaos, then stillness, then the administrator's cold procedural response, and then—BOOM—cut to Bai Bai assembling shelving. The transition is so jarring it's almost comedic, but it's not. It's devastating. The structure also does something clever with information. We don't know who hurt this man until halfway through his internal monologue. By the time we connect the dots back to Bai Bai, we're already watching her put together furniture like nothing happened. The chapter ends on that note, which is such a perfect cliffhanger—not because of action, but because of the emotional whiplash. How long until this man's death catches up to her? I need to know.
It is filled with suspense ............
