I haven't read horror in a while, this was a nice return to it!First off, I really like the interactions between Oliver and Noah, they're both enjoyable and pretty realistic characters. The description of the horror stalking Noah gave me a vivid, creepy image in my head--which means the author succeeded!I like where this is going and definitely will be waiting to see what comes next.
It needs work but I can tell the author is passionate and likes to write. I can appreciate the effort and am willing to respect the dedication to writing something of this length. There’s a lot of room for change and improvement.
Been waiting for a novel based only on body cultivationSo far good novel with small spelling mistakes so the novel need some proof readingAnd kind of on the fence about the MC as the guy attracks too much attention when he should be more low profileWell for now still an ok read compared to chinese novels with the same genre
With all of the NSFW scenes in this book at such an early stage the story is often held up by the mc doing lecherous acts which, at chapter 8, involves him basically forcing himself upon a naive girl.
So i felt like reading some isekai and stumbled upon this... My rating overall is about 3.8The writing quality i wont comment on because it feels okay to me and even if there are mistakes i don't think it's a big deal either way.Story-wise there isn't anything too far from what we have seen in these kind of stories but personally i dislike the MC. So this is where my rant to the author starts.He just seems completely strange to me...like TOO POLITE for one, i mean i get it everyone has manners and such but this guy just feels over the top for me, sometimes a few of his thoughts he keeps to himself would have been better said out loud to help develop the story along with his character..Speaking of which his interaction with women, it's obvious this is a harem route but why does this MC lack so much backbone? Even the slightest of touches from the teasing Dog Girl has him flustered like he has never interacted with women his entire life mind you this should be someone that is at least around 17-20 years old since he is doing job hunting in his previous life. I'll just assume the author is doing it for comedy i guess...Last but not least does this guy think for himself? I mean i get it at the start where he was just learning and all that but for someone that comes from our world with all these anime and movies you're telling me this guy never once thought about experimenting with his magic? Someone had to tell him to try fusing for him to do it? He summoned familiar's that seem to be thousand of years old but never considered asking them for advice on magic from their experience? This guy just feels like a clueless side character most times that hold up a sign that say "I'm the MC" every now and then. Also author you should flesh out his harem some more because even reading this over the few days sometimes i'm barely remembering who is who, then again i assume you were probably waiting for later to have some 'special moments' with the MC to flesh them out some more.Either way i'm still following along...this is just my thoughts good luck on the story.
Writing Quality: Not perfect, sure. But nobody is ?. Definitely readable and doesn't hurt the eyes.Stability of Updates: 1 chapter a day... Author says he lacks the time for more chapters ?. This is still good, atleast chapters aren't appearing at random.Story Dev: Good, but can be improved (author will accumulate exp along the way).World BG: This... Too few chap for a proper one I guess?Char design: Also suffering from the lack of current chapters to make a proper analysis
honestly, the only reason im writing this review, is because the guy thats stealing this work isnt giving the information the translator is providing, so here it is:Title: Cannon Fodder Cheat SystemChinese Title: 炮灰作弊系统[快穿]Author: 橘子舟 (Tangerine Boat)Genres: BL, Action, Fantasy, Comedy, Romance, etc.Mature Language/Scenes: Yes!!!Official Raws: jjwxcUnofficial Raws: sto.cc (or many other sites thru Google/Baidu)Release Frequency: ~ 2 chapters / weekyes you read it right, this is BL.honestly its good, but i only read till chapter 8, where BL surfaces, so i cant tell you many details. im giving this a score that i think is fair till ch8 even if i dislike BL, even though chapter 1 and prologue annoyed me to no end with showing backstories and 6-8 full asian names down my throat expecting me to remember them... srsly the only name i remember is Hades, and he seems like a minor character that will appear once every 100chps maybe. anyways, thats all from me. dont think me as some gay hater, i dont have anything against gay people, but i also dont wanna read a novel with explicit gay scenes either.PEACE!
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Uhh havent read yet, just thought it was funny how the author said he could promise persistence and then 13 chapters in its dropped and has been so for 7 months
Finally am on holiday can finally get this book completed, my first attempt in writing its based on my life tho, the ending would be unpredictable but I'll finish this story
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