How does this get chosen and Protect Our chief and Master breakthroughs at Death both not get chosen????? I need to meet the person who’s willing to spend coins on these trash novels
[Reviewed on: 26-09-2021]
[Reading status: 8 chapters]
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[Strong points:]
- The lighter tone is kept throughout the chapters, giving it a fully blended humorous style fused with cultivation genre.
- You must've seen many books with the particular fusion but what makes this book different (in my opinion) is the MC's savage personality.
- The author has improved visibly in crafting out an MC with the flaw and at the same time with the geniuses and clear aim. The MC is consistently sharp with his tongue and playful.
- Another aspect I laughed upon was the turning of cliches upside down, you'll know this when you reach chapter 5-7
- A reasonable amount of information in sprinkled in the initial chapters, which didn't make it hard to swallow that there are 3 girls with MC and a headmistress who is intrigued by him, along with the female receptionist who became chanted by him.
- Another good aspect are vaguely displayed double meaning jokes, however in some places it's stated in clear words. But the lighter comedic tone didn't make it appear cringe.
- I can foresee ha-rem (intentionally written like this cuz comments get deleted, it's a forbidden word) although I still believe that the MC is stuck with the 1st girl he met in chapter 1.
- The relationship of MC's parents is itself kinda amusing, and I was really glad to read a powerful mother instead of weak and oppressive one.
- The storyline is fused with 'system' too, which however didn't feel heavily influenced since it's a lo-li girl guiding the MC. Although the plot leaves numerous questions unanswered and to ponder.
- The narration is highly readable, as far as in 8 chapters I didn't see any flaws and mistakes. The chapters have something intriguing to say to the readers.
[Weakness:]
- As far as in initial 8 chapters, none!
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[Strong point: fast pace | adult comedy]
[Weak point: none in initial 8 chapters]
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At 60 Chaps to early to to recognize if it is a drag story or not.As usual first volume has no problems.
Helllo, I needed a break from reality, So I created this short chapters sad story. I hope some can relate and I hope it can help you out when needed!
Another book from my favourite author!
Here is what to expect :
1) The book is just a rollercoaster of funny . Some chapters are more funny , some chapters are less funny , BUT ALL CHAPTERS are funny !!
2) Ducks! Lots of ducks! and even more ducks!
3) Absolutely legendary dialogues and face slapping.
4) Impeccable grammar and writing quality! The story flows smoother than butter.
5) Whatt?? u want more? Go read now lurker !
I’m only 40 chapters in but im loving it so far, can’t wait to see where the story goes!
Hello, Author here This is just to clear a few things first of all
The two main characters John and James have new blades which can take the form of any tool they desire as well as the colour of it depends on their emotions so John's is black cause he HIDES his emotion while James's is white because he shows too many emotions
Your writing is very enjoyable to read. Easy and smooth chapters that i can blaze through without too much of a hurdle. it isnt choppy either. The story have just begun, but the idea can blast off into many different ways. i love scifi stories. Keep it up!
The concept of the story is cool and the exaggerations of the characters make it hilarious to watch. I totally love the funny dialogues and the way they are put.
It is weird and yet nice to be in a game. I could visualise the apocalypse and all the things described in the book.
I only wish that I hadn't felt overwhelmed by the sudden physical descriptions of the characters. Otherwise, the story is going great and has wonderful ideas to make it seem like the next Hunger Games.
I wish you good luck, Author!
Shame doesn't feed you, so there's no point in having shame.
Try it, you won't regret it.
Also, you might want to read this when you're alone...Along with wearing baggy pants...
I think it is high time I review Myriad Island...but what will I say?This novel mostly revolves around Elias who finds peace after escaping his Past. Sadly after things seem to flow in a good way for him, he was swallowed by Space and found himself in another World... and he was forced to fight to survive.Well, the concept is not new, but that was about almost all novels, but the purpose and the flow of things are unique, Fresh out of Celestial Mind!It contained depth and Lore that will be unravelled gradually as we go deep into the story. If you have any...?... you can ask them here!