I am not really good at writing reviews but well I want to write a review for this book. I do enjoy reading the book and I feel that this book is well... good to read? like i said I am not too good at this but I would like the author to know that I like this book and wish that there would be more updates and longer chapters cause they kind feel a tad short.
Despite it having many flaws, I enjoyed reading this novel, mainly because I learned the hard way that when reading a webnovel I should mostly turn my brain off... Anyway, let's get started on listing what I didn't like, since that's usually what I'm looking for in reviews. There are slight inconsistencies with main character's personality. Sometimes he's curious, sometimes he's not. Author seems to think that having limited curiosity is a strong point and insists that mc must be like that, which you know I'm not really against that, cuz it's his story, he can have his own views and can talk about them however he wants. But, whenever plot needs to move forward the curiosity somehow appears! Ta-da! It's like magic.As with any novel written for commercial purposes, it's full of cliches, this shouldn't come off as too much of a surprise at this point. There's nothing wrong with cliches, what's important is how it's used, but of course you can't expect much from a webnovel (once again). The cliche I'm talking about isn't the system or anything which has been elaborated on countless times, for some reason I've not noticed people talking about this much, it's when mc gets a new tool or ability and it miraculously comes in handy, for some god forsaken reason it's somehow just what he needed. But at least he doesn't get everything served to him on a silver platter, he still hasn't gotten the english skill he desperately needed but considering it has turned into his only weakness by now, I suspect it was kept to make mc not seem too op, while at the same time get a reason to make some jokes. The comedy is above average in this novel imo, it's not really good but isn't meh.The relationship with female characters seems weird. It smells of harem, but it also feels like max author will do is write suggestive things, I'd prefer if there's no romance altogether. Author randomly deducts mc's IQ for the sake of comedy, while at other times he becomes a straight A student. Police doesn't exist in this world, as far as I've noticed. A guy gets repeatedly beaten up over the span of approximately over a week, but doesn't report mc to the police. Possible explanations I can think of is not wanting to be known as a snitch, no one wanting to testify bcs he's a gangster (but his friends got beaten up together with him, plus since he's a gangster he could use threats), not wanting to lose face (but the whole neighborhood knows about it), or it could just be a plot convenience. I wonder which one is it? ?That'll be it cuz Webnovel lags really hard whenever I try to write a review.
I do not usually read horror but i will say this book is quite interesting, the plot is great, the horror is definitely there, your writing skill is really good too, well done.
I like the idea of the Mc being a necromantic summoner, and while I am a bit biased with summoning novels I truly like the story. and while the Mc looks and feels a lot like William he has his own characteristics that different him. mc also has a terrible naming sense but besides that good novel ??
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I have high reviews for this book.But, maybe it's my personal preference, but I hate mc like these...his personality is not what I like in Mc's... it's like those Japanese novel Mc's horney, and a goody-to-shoes no less and I can't seem to substitute myself in the story.I have read up until chapter 21 and l have to say the world background is still unclear but is okay...And maybe it's me again...but the foreboding of a future potential threat of the previous perfect human for me just made the story lose its slice of life and mellow atmosphere...because at the end of this is it's either him the perfect human or someone he going to fight win and live happily ever after.To much detail about the world Plot at the beginning of the story just ruin good books...eg stories of maybe cultivation worlds...where at the beginning of the story a Mc's transmigration is planned and already known by a higher being in chapter 1 or 2, maybe it's just that I don't like a story where the mc is just a puppet
I’m not saying this novel is bad or something but come on be real giving wine to a 8 to 9 year old kid are you dumb?
oh my...what will happen next to Lisa after the Alpha Coronation of Ryan?
The book is good but not finished.
Finish the book please
i like this story and i can't wait for the next chapter
nice very good amazing Novel