For first-time readers (and with higher Qi according to other reviews) this can be a very good novel. But readers with average Qi who are already well accustomed to this kind of portals + gamer system, this is an average novel, maybe even a little below that.I'm not a professional critic so don't expect a complex analysis from a Google translator user like me.I just found the novel in general average and the writing a little below average. It was not pleasant to read like many others we have out there.I want to make it clear that average is not a bad thing and I intend to continue reading this novel, that was just my honest review.Sorry for any erros, i used google translator.
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The story is Relatively Good. The Quality is also ok even if Grammar is a bit of a problem here and there. One of the best parts of the story are the Characters. They are multidimensional in the emotional department. Update and world background is also ok. Biggest Criticism I can give is the story Development and the early ch. The Early 40 ch. are for a lack of a better word boring and borderline terrible, i don't need 40 ch. where I read that the MC is weak. 10 would have been enough, it's to drawn out. The story Development is generic, most plotlines are kind of cliche, it's hard to write something Original and come up with a complete new plot but the story Development kinda dregs the Characters down. It's not bad, far from it but like I said it's kinda generic. After the first 40 ch. it get much better, so I would advise everyone to at least read the free ch. 3.8/5
This is a great story for those who wants this kind of Genre about Games. Although this is not my kind of Genre, but it's a unique one since it is the trend nowadays. The grammar, punctuations, and capitalizations needs to be proofread and be corrected. And for that I gave you a 4 stars.Keep it up author!
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biggest complaint is it is not being updated and the author on patreon hasn't updated any of their novels in about a year. I would read it only if you mental stimulation and don't care about the story not being finished. it has a great number of typos as well, but that can easily be forgiven by the storys quality. sometimes forget some of the charecters background with some of the names not being as distinct as they could be between so many charecters. just an issue with harem style books I guess. as a reader who got to the end of the current content and the few extra chapters on his patreon, i wouldn't mind paying to read the rest of the story. Author, if you see this, please restart writing and updating this book. I wouldn't mind paying coins and privilage memberships to read new content.
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To be honest I only and giving it 5 stars because the title and disc sounds cool. Like if u did the same as me.expexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexp
The world background is poor. I wish the author would give more details regarding the era. There is no backstory nothing.***********************
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