First of all, the rating of this novel is mega faked. Out of the 236 current reviews, about 100 of them are fake 5 star spam. I'm not sure whether the author deletes lower revs, but well, if the post is gone then... The grammar was pretty bad. The story was also basic and simple. Most of all, the author kept stealing plotlines from God of Music and Top Management, without even bothering to change nothing other than the name. If it was once, okay then... but it keeps happening, and with the story already average enough as it is, it makes it hard to keep reading. Literally, basically all of his ideas were directly copied off the novels. Also, I think he claimed there was an editor... but it didnt feel like it at all...It feels like the novel has a lot of cliche and plot armor too... Not as bad as most fan fic, but... It might not be that bad if you are a new reader, and your English isnt the best, however if u read blot of online novels already, then... The characters felt like ones u see in most harems, 2d..,Overall, the only advantage of the novel was the update speed. I really wanted to keep reading, as there is barely any celeb novels and I like them, I really tried... but it kept making me want to turn off my phone... sorry... Plus... I especially dont like pirates...
Basically you can skip most of the chapter and you don't miss anything important.The MC is retarded as ****. Gains a scanner of good athletes near 10 meters of him and doesn't abuse it.Has an almighty Wikipedia voice in the head (that is really baby spoon feed basic information like it was a hidden knowledge of the mighty sage) and doesn't ask or test the limits of his answers to plan the most efficient way to use his powers.I already said he is retarded, but why? Well I only read until the chapter 10 but I couldn't stand it anymore. You have a one time buff time for a beginner chest and you want to use it immediately without none to train ? are you stupid?Then, the system tells him numerous times that he can train random people...WHy can't he do it in the spare time he has ? He only trains the fat kids like a part-time job! Use the maximum time of your buff dude !!And then he has a genius (insert meme genius here) idea to say...HEY ! I can train 8 fats kids, if I can train 10.000 kids of high school I can be richhh! Jesus ****...what the **** the author is thinking.Dropped. Don't waste your time.2 Stars because no harem or horny Chinese idiot.
Not very clear definition on stages of genes, weapon and cultivation realm. Really hard to understand certain notes and points. Too rushed for a good novel.
please stop writing these pathetic stories let these women go on with their life and stop pining for these men that don't want them.
There's a recurring motif in these chapters that I can't stop thinking about: the idea of things that dissolve or disappear. The Corpse-Dissolving Insect consumes a body until nothing remains — not even bones. And Fang Xun'gui has been dissolving his own memories for nine years, burying them so deep that even he's not sure what's real anymore. The transition between dusk and dawn, when Fang Xun'gui realizes how much he's told Yuyi Yue, feels symbolically loaded. That liminal space between day and night is exactly where buried things surface. Then there's the image of 'old age' — Yuyi Yue casually mentioning getting sick when you're old, and Fang Xun'gui's bitter reaction: 'Old age—that was truly a luxury for a killer.' This one line carries so much thematic weight. A killer's life is defined by its abruptness, its lack of future. The fact that he's lying in the same bed as Yuyi Yue, being scolded about his eating habits, is almost obscene in how domestic and normal it feels. The desolate courtyard itself is a symbol — it's empty, ruined, forgotten, yet it's becoming a place of warmth and cooking smoke. The author keeps returning to the contrast between death (corpses, the Netherworld Hall, the Corpse-Dissolving Insect) and small acts of care (brewing tea, preparing meals, worrying about sleep). The deeper theme here seems to be about what we choose to preserve versus what we let dissolve. Fang Xun'gui wants to preserve the truth about his brother, about nine years ago. Yuyi Yue preserves life — tending to the courtyard, feeding him, keeping secrets. The Corpse-Dissolving Insect was originally created as a way to make evidence disappear, but in Yuyi Yue's hands, it becomes something else entirely. I'm not sure the author intended all of this, but the symbolism is too consistent to ignore.
only the title alone is captivating.
loved this story so much
Very enjoyable story
this is am interesting movies and novel
The story flow is good. I can't help but feel, though, that the author changed towards the end of the first book because the language changed. the grammar used to be good and the story was consistent then towards the end, including the bonuses, the grammar got really bad plus, which irked me.
Can’t wait for the next chapter
It ok,,,still why do I keep having to stop reading to rate book , when I paid to read??????