I forgot to apologize for some grammatical errors i made in my previous comment, please don't mind them, I haven't slept for like 28 hours now. I submmited it before rereading it and after reading it again, i found quite a few.
Book is still development phase but I already really like it
can someone pick this up, this series is really good and i want to see the story progressing
story is very good so far, and there's some depth in the characters that I like. Plus, alexander the great is actually a sick side kick to have in a story like this one.
Honestly love it. ??????
Enjoyable both inside and out of the smuttiness.❤️??
Looking forward to where it goes. ??
I like the novel and the format of 2 protagonists, Ye Shengge being the best for me, it is excellent, something I would have liked is that the number of women will be expanded, I think 6 is very few [img=update]
don't mind me im just reviewing my own novel , I saw my favorite author do it so I'm following in his footsteps , I'm shameless I know "haha"☺️
Brother, is it good to start another one if you haven't finished the other novel yet?
I have seen many authors, the quality of their novels has decreased like this.
90% confirmed that the second novel has more filler content than other novels. such as conversations or thoughts between fights - women or insignificant characters' thoughts about the mc - forced situations where random characters try to engage with the mc. And everything that is not related to the story and is repeated in all novels.
In short, just pay attention to that part of talking or additional explanations and people's thoughts exactly in the middle of the fight (I'm begging you), you want to give only a pure fight with notes about the movements after the fight.
I know you have your own thoughts. Good job. Good luck.
Raws? [img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=Why]
Current rank 1, idk if it’s relevant at the time your reading this.
Who does our mc ends up with or there are multiple of love interest if the latter one i don't think I will read it
The Devil girl and Angel lady are so funny. Nice humor to the latest chapter plus the heat at the end is cooking up some heat girl.