Used to liked this book a lot until chapter 41.At first ,the mc is funny. Definitely funny. He's a bit dumb and stupid but still bearable somehow and it added more flavor in the story .But, as the story continues, it started to become unbearable. At least for me. There's few things I hate to see or I don't want to see in a novel. First was a dense mc and second was a super dumb mc. Sadly, this novel has both so I'll stop here.
I thought the novel would have some serious aspect in it despite the constant misunderstandings. But, man no everyone is stupid even the mc is f***ing stupid.
How to ruin a fanbase? Stop updating for months.
>> Read this till 280 chapter. I was really looking forward to this novel. The idea of MC being famous coz of Alchemist profession was great but till Chapter 280 there is not an ounce of alchemy involved (it might be there in later chapters but it would have been better if MC mentioned it in earlier chapters on his plans and all)World building is nice. >> Character development is okay.>> Character growth and connections with others is kinda lame. >> Starting was good and I was really looking forward to it. Later, the story keeps me thinking as if written by some 16 yr old kid.>> @Author Don't get me wrong. I've nothing against you and I would love to see this novel grow more beautifully.I would love to help if you are looking for somebody to proofread.>> I would really like it if we could connect (to bounce some ideas) Pls reply back if u r okay with it and I will send my email.
This story is aggravatingly stupid. The author tries really hard to make the conversations and internal thoughts edgy, but it only works if you don't try to match what they say with their motivations.I really wanted to like this story. I think the overall plot and settings are interesting.
Highly recommended!
update please! I'm waiting for the 2nd part of the story ...
.................................
Gosh these two ?? Good luck with your exam n thank you for these chapters! At least we know he want her but does she want him now ? Monday don’t come fast enough !
Love this story..hope it ends soon ..
So gripping and couldn’t put it down!
I love it ,the idea have the story line hope number 2 comes