I really like the script format of it, it's very easy to read and it hasn't been an idea I've thought of for some reason. The story developement is very good and at its best.
The type of Yuri in this novel is borderline NTR.This isn’t a Harem novel, it’s more polyamory as its ‘group love’ as opposed to MC being the sole focus.Apart from that the story is good and worth a read.
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Academy. Elemental. Fire DRAGON. A fantasy in the modern world!! I do not know how someone cold give this book a one star. This book is absolutely fantastic! I simply love the setting and I would gladly walk to the academy even it I am not invited! I mean, please adopt me!! XD
please continue this fanfiction..........
A lovely bl with the right mixture of fluff and smut.It is a bit rapey(who am I kidding) at the beginning but eventually thec falls for the ml legitimately.It awfully cute and a wonderful light read.Though the starting may be a bit dubious for some.
This is an interesting novel! Thank God I found it. Phew! Thank you for this wonderful novel and I'll continue reading it just like "wish of the dragon" it's an interesting novel so as this one. So I'm glad to find it. ? keep up the great work!??
Don't waste your time this is a troll. complete bs using the system which is still in beta. the whole novel is a beg for votes. the dumb idiot wrote a line or two and copy posted it into 7 chapters. Please remove this abomination from the novel list.
Overall pretty good. Writing quality was okay; punctuation could use a little work as well as capitalization. I would mainly use more commas to separate phrases. The author has created a vivid and interesting MC, and the story has a cool premise. Keep writing author! Looking forward to seeing you and the story grow!
Great plot! Amazing character, nice Title and hooking cover.The story got me, addicted, this is the most-read work! Not to miss by any. You're a talented author. I enjoy your work.recommended:),
I read to chapter 7.I don't really read the mafia trope and don't know much, but I find the plot very unique and interesting. Especially the auctioning element. I really liked how Erika started out as a human trafficking slave. It makes their encounter very believable versus the other kinds of unrealistic meetings with mafias. Something I find inconsistent with Lacus's character is he doesn't know what he wants? Like he wants to be alone forever and remain cruel and evil, but he also wonders what it's like to have a true love? I find this contradiction repeatedly throughout the story and because of that his character isn't developed.The grammars make some parts of the story hard to follow, but I really do see potential in this novel to be something awesome!!!! ?
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