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This story sure deserves more than a five star. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
It's unique and very interesting to read.
I love the writer's writing style. It's smooth and easy to read. HOUSE OF FIRE is a story you won't regret reading. I recommend it to lovers of action packed mystery stories.
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its alright, i guess. i read up to chapter 10 before i stopped. interactions between father and son are very unnatural and feels super robotic, and it feels like the bisexual stuff is done more for the sake of it than for actual character development. MC is inconsistent in some places, acting and behaving out of character for a "lone wolf" type. also, it felt like a poor writing choice to have the very first job be irregular. inconsistencies with registering to become a porter like how the guy who signed him asked for no ID at all. i guess if you want a novel with a gay mc, this is a choice. otherwise? just read SS rank suicide hunter or stay at home dad in another world, both of which fill their niche better than this one thats straddling both.
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Except for the author's updating schedule , everything about this book is perfect. Kahala is such a sweet heart and so is Avyanna but from the looks of it seems that the book is soon to end , I wish it had se vetal more chapter or had an angle on Anas and Kahalata like one of the chapter but all is upyog the author. All I can say is that this book is awesome. Keep cheating such beautiful world .
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I think I should stop reading reviews before the actual novel. It's already ruined my view of this novel that I could've enjoyed. Is this a big mood for anyone else?
The cover 5/5The synopsis 5/5The writing? It was amazingly written and it surprised me that Webnovel has such quality writer. This is a hidden gem and I'm glad to discover it.
It is a better version of legend of the perfect emperor that doesnt get dropped halfway through 3 times. its a reallyyyyyy good read and in no way get the recognition it deserves. i would put it with some of my favorite novels out there. Heres a quick summary. So basically the 18 yearold leader of rhe universe goes on an adventure because he board being a king. Has a good slice of life story, great world buiding so far (chapter 476) and Absolutely amazing character development. its an amazing novel and i 100% reccomend it. i really hope it gets the recognition it deserves in the future, maybe ever going as far as top 5 on the power stone rankings. overall a really enjoyable read.
This novel is a rather fun read. Unlike other novels of the same type (the OP MC which keeps out of the limelight), this novel is much better.Most importantly, the MC has character and is just generally a fun character to read about. He isn't some super stoic apathetic person that only ever shows up when everyone is on the brink of the death. His main goal is to enjoy life, and it makes for an enjoyable read.If you're looking for a novel that is a simple, fun time with a light-hearted tone and fun characters, this novel meets all of those expectations.
Nothing much to say but a nice novel to read................................................................................................
The plot is nice, English and grammer, everything is in place. You should read this novel if you are interested in Master-disciple novels. ?
This is the best gamer story I have read in hundreds of stories I have read at this site. Your gamer story looks more realistic than the other's, especially the stat increase point.