DeraBlue
this novel has so much potential. it's really great. unfortunately the mc become one dimensional real quick. i hate that every time he comes to some places the author always use the usual troupe of having everyone despise him. what i can't understand, he already show his capabilities and power, but why people who know about them never inform others how capable the MC is and keep let him being mock by others and invite troubles. I mean he save the children of the castellan in breezy plains, how hard it is for the daughtee to witness everything to inform his father about his capabilities? why keep the MC being overlooked by this stupid reasoning?
this Story ist boring. the MC is sitting in His Castle doing nothing but Reading a Chat. the summoned "Battle Units" or NPC are exactly Like that.. little kids without personality. the whole Thing is Just endlessly repeating the word unique to remind everyone of how powerfull the MC is compared to Others and that they dont even have the Chance to compete the whole Thing might develope a bit when it reaches the 7th day in the Story .. bit i doubt it. and i dont think its worth investing in this slim Chance but If Reading about a Guy who gets endlessly gloryfied by the narrator and everything is smooth sayling with mindless yes-girls as Harem component, then this is the Story for you to read
The first ten chapters are very instructive concerning Japanese martial arts, it incredible how much you learn from this novel, additionally, the story development so far is top notch!
The translation seems pretty terrible especially when it comes to levels. It is really inconsistent. The idea behind the cheat is pretty good. Personally, I think this idea has potential as it isn't super overpowered and the MC still has to work for his power, but at the same time I feel like it could be nerfed a bit more. As for the characters, they are horribly inconsistent. One minute you have people groping each other in the chow hall and the next you have the author talking about how conservative people are in this world and they aren't familiar with those sorts of things. The author can't seem to make up their mind of the characterizations/world setting which is unfortunate.
The most infuriating story I have read in a while.
This the type of story you read just before commiting a mass murder with the world class level of burning anger this generates.
You and your wall have been warned.
See; this is what I don't understand about these types of fanfics, It is basically just cannon with slight changes.. Author why would we read a fanfic, if the story is the same as cannon?!?!?! who would do that? I'd rather just read the original if that is the case,, apart from small changes here and there, it isn't anything interesting.. and not even funny like how this series was supposed to be.. (SD1/5)
writing quality is "meh", if you ignore the random 4th wall breaks.. (WQ2/5)
stability of updates is terrible.. (SOU1/5)
character design, it is basically Saitama but boring (CD1/5)..
world background, hardly any descriptions of locations, it is like Mc is here, the goes home, then goes to the supermarket or manga store.. I mean, where are they? whats the time when he did that? so yeah, no world building..
honestly.. this is a poor attempt at a fanfic.. that's my review.. (OVERALL1.2)
Abusive racism starts at chapter 18. Those who don't like chinese racist content and people from countries like Japan and America beware .................................
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Too unoriginal. I can almost see where the story is going. I'll delete the review if it turns out to be different from what I expected
Sloth has always been one of my personal favourites when it comes to authors on WN and I have the firsthand pleasure of knowing about his books from him. This book is another example of how good his writing is and I can't just wait to see more of it.
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