Hello, a few words from the author
This is a slow-paced story, please be patient with :) and this is a rework of my second novel Tribe Online.
since this is a game novel, I will try to balance 40% time within the game, 40% time about his real life, and the remaining 20% is about competitive scene, e-sport, and others. I will try to balance it like this.
Criticisms are welcomed, but sometimes (or maybe most of the time) people think that sh*t-talking is being "harsh" to critic the author while actually, it's not a criticism, you are being rude. I will delete such a review if there's one. thanks and hope you enjoy the story.
I love it, i was looking for something to read and this caught my eye. Well written and the author keeps the story interesting, a must read
I cant understand the translation. Nothing matters if the translation is garbage. The expressions don't make sense, nothing makes sense. Those who stuck with it, I have to say super impressed.
Really good book. Even though the summary says otherwise. The mc is equally involved and has a quite diverse scope of achievements. It makes me feel like binge reading it. I really wish this book gets translated
This is the long explanation go down to get the short version:This one was pretty mediocre and not that intresting but obviously it will get chosen out of all the other new novels that are more interesting if you look at the amount of people that are paying to read this anyway this novel uses what's already known to work and just changes a few things but it gets the work done so now qidian has become a echo chamber of these already established plots and theme
Short version:I dont like this
I really like this book. The characters are fleshed out and the world building has gene steadily implemented. The elders of the sect are actually caring and not scheming old farts. It feels like a family instead of the usual.
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This is my first reading of a litrpg novel, but I can say this novel is promising. Narrated in the first-person perspective of the main character.
But what needs to be regretted is punctuation that is often forgotten.
I began to confuse the narrator or the main character's thoughts.
But overall is a good story so far, update more chappy and the reader will be happy!
Sorry dude but I gotta say it, the title says detained for greatness which makes it sound like the hero is imprisoned, don't you mean destined for greatness? Sorry it was bothering me and I had to point it out. Still great story, keep up the great work.
U did a wonderful job here this is a must read
There was no dull moment at all this piece is a blast
Hey there!
Good day for writing! If you wanted to check whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact [email protected]. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Hey there!
Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new works, you might want to contact
[email protected]. A brief introduction, some sample chapters, or links will be appreciated when reaching out.