This book will be better if it had a good proof reader because the way it change from his to her is just too much man is hard to know who is meant to be talking sometimes
In the latest chapters, he rarely uses his powers, and the plot is same as one of the stories I read.The competitionrecruitment from a grand elder of another sect who is beautiful girlsome evil sect reviving.selection of talents and ranking them.solving array formation for some elder who'll help him craft his weapon.Everything is the same. Straight plagiarizing .
Okay where do I start…. I dont really understand why this novel has such a high rating. I started reading it only because I generally like this kind of story and it had a high rating. Now after about 60 Chapters I’m dropping it out of the following reasons: - Fighting in general is just unrealistic. Take the first few chapters for example: Untrained, weak and stupid MC gets chased by a pack of wolves. He climbs on a tree, breaks off a few twigs, somehow magically sharpens them and then throws them like olympic champion and impales all enemies….Of course ! And stuff like that happens again and again. - The System/Powerscaling is just completely random. He basically just kills wolfs at first, which are like the weakest creatures, and suddenly he is the stongest guy in town. As if every other citizen never fought a single battle. Apparently the wolves are pretty abundant in this reason but only he leveled up significantly. I mean he is the hero but as far as I know, that just means he has no level cap. A System is a good way to set up a frame for your story. How do things work? What are you capable off and what do you need to do to get stronger. Doesn’t really work if your MC is playing by different rules! And dont even talk about the 400 ultimate skills he colllects left an right from every mop character that exists . - The MC is just annoying….he starts as a guy who has basically no self esteem, no real will to live and who doesnt stand up for himsel….that itself is not a bad thing, it’s just how the story is. Then he gives up his humanity and becomes a typical cliche villain who explains his evil plan, mocks his opponent for beeing week and then gets nearly killed in the next second .He just feels inconsistent….For example he just knows lots off stuff that he actually shouldn’t know just because he read a book for a few hours and in the next second he makes completely stupid decisions, like killing three guys and stealing their wagon afterwards. I mean if i kill someone the first thin i do is stealing their car and park it in my driveway ? Well if you can look over the things i wrote, than you might enjoy this novel but i stopped reading it and will probably not continue it. I’m no native speaker, if you find some mistakes, you are allowed to keep them ?
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I Am The Fated Villain tells the story of how Chinese Sephiroth uses the power of Stockholm Syndrome to cuck obnoxious cultivation protagonists.One of the novel's features is the scheming as it quickly evolves past simple cat and mouse. In order to become the invincible ruler the world, our protagonist Gu Changge plays the impostor in a big game of Among Us against the cultivation world. Since the story has a good level of logical consistency, reading through Gu Changge's plots will provide an ample supply of big brain moments.Unusual for a cultivation novel, I Am The Fated Villain has great characterization. There are a lot of very memorable side characters; personalities are distinct, motives are clearly explained, and interesting character development is common. How these characters react to Gu Changge's actions is the novel's main source of tension and payoff.The novel does have flaws that stick out to me. The exposition is sometimes repetitive. The power system is utterly one-note. Gu Changge feels too perfect.Also it's quite fun to read, specially if you're someone like me, whi loves cold-blooded villain MC who will do anything in order to get stronger.And the transaction quality was also degraded over after 200 or so chapters. Wonder if author will correct them in future.So overall: PERFECTION*Phew that was quite a work*
it's a great novel ... quite a bit different from other vr novels ..thanks:) ...............................................................
hahahaha finally! You uploaded it.
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Ah yes, a raw link to this fabulous Webnovel story would be indeed splendid, as this simple reincarnation story is like no other I have seen. so yes, I would most enjoy the unrefined hyperlink for this story.
Sincerely, GrammerPolice
Deym... you made a new one? I missed your apocalypse novel man.
Something's rising, and it's not the planet of the apes...
It's the planet with something deeper, deeper than your mo- yeah, let's not go there...
Kekeke...
I like the story and have recently been reading it and it is fantastic in my opinion and I hope there will be more chapters (currently chappter 496)