1- the WG dosnt give out bounties for randoms for no reason, so mc getting a bounty for just fighting mihwak is retarded. Hell they didnt even approach him, and yet they gave him a bounty. Thats stupid. High bounty is dope, but give a reason. Hell luffy punched a noble and attacked marine ford and destroyed impel down and he only had his bounty raised by 100 mill (though all fans hated this, and i agree...)but i hope u get what i mean
2- what retard tells that they are from another world? Dude, u dont do this. Why would u do this? Unique power is believable, especially in one piece
3- why is MC so trusting that he gives this info within hrs of meeting? I get they fought but seriously? Telling u are from another world to a stranger? I am an amnesiac would've been enough
Look story is interesting, dope even BUT damn man, no bash/flame but ur bk has some retarded shit
trash the title is also misleading, the title should be i make the bad guy disciple to good guy, i thought i found another novel like reverend insanity but this is trash
misleading title
And turning back you will realize that you a ordinary person
I like the amount of detail given in the book. The story also progresses in a smooth and interesting manner. It also has a lot of interesting characters that make it a compelling read.
Keep up the good word. :D
Your plot is interesting. Writing style is good and your choice of words is amazing. There are a few grammatical errors but that can be fixed with proofreading. Keep writing!
Ooooohhhhh the plot is really interesting. Three chapters were enough to get me hooked, I want to read more. Loving the sameless MC.
Keep at it author
AAAAAAHHHH I LIKE THIS A LOT BUT WHY DID THEY NOT CHOOSE THIS!!
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Great writing, great story, great world. The entire idea about the "Freakquencies" causing the mutations is pretty neat, but I was just so happy about how readable it was and fun! Great fight details too!
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